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| Hidemitsu Samanosuke Akechi 2003-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. BTW: OZ stands for Orginization of the Zoidac. Why do u think all of thier suits are named after Zoidac signs? |
| SJ 2002-12-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseHEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why haven't you updated?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! |
| Jewls2 2002-12-10 ch 3, | abuseHi there!! I thought you killed her at the start. But the come back was really good. Can`t wait for the other chappie!! Ciao!! |
| grets 2002-11-17 ch 3, | abuseHurry up with more. This is good. |
| Purdy 2002-11-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseGood writing. Keep up the good work. I especially like the little action sequence in the second chapter. Small and simple, but I just like it.:) Your writing is very easy to read but at the same time it has a certain style that catches my attention. I won't forget to check this fic for the next update.;) |
2002-10-22 ch 3, anon. | abusei think that tis a great fic. I diffinately think that it would be a good idea to put up the fourth chapter if you have it done. |
| Ley 2002-10-20 ch 3, | abuseThis is great! please continue soon. |
| Prinder 2002-10-20 ch 3, | abuseI've just finished reading the first three chapters of this fic so I'm going to see if I can help you improve your skills. the detailes are alright, but you could always use more. I like what you've done with the French, but you need to make it so that people can understand it while they're still reading it. I recall from a fic made by another person, that they did something like this: "Domo Arigato Relena-Sama" [Thank you very much Miss Relena] Okay, so maybe that was pretty much well known in the fandom world, but if you did something like that when they're talking in Fench it just might help. I like this fic so far, keep up the good work! ~Prinder |
| Izanami 2002-10-20 ch 1, | abuseheehe. heero is the best. never mess with him |
| Izanami 2002-10-20 ch 2, | abusei like |
| Izanami 2002-10-20 ch 3, | abusei absolutely love this story so far. keep going |
| ndblue123 2002-10-20 ch 3, | abusePlease continue!!!!! |
| beth 2002-10-20 ch 3, anon. | abusegreat story. very interesting. i like it. please continue and update soon. |
| Goddess Gin 2002-10-19 ch 3, | abuseAwww...the two friends are reunited! Very intriguing...did i spell that right?...not important. Anyway, great story, i can't wait for more! Sage ^_~ |
| SJ 2002-10-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE MOREMORE... you get the idea |