Ozai's response to that last one lmao lol
Great chapter but I hate that they have to ": break up" but they'll get back together, I know it! #Zuzu(:

I just read the black games on Friday May 17 finished it on Friday that night. Started The Rise Of One on satuarday morning and finished where u left off on sunday night! Amazing huh?! Hurry and finish the next chapter I'm dying to know what happens between Katara and Zuko. And if Zuko does die or not(which him dying is unlikely). Please please hurry!

i like this a lot i prefer ZUTARA than KATAANG anyday

zuko's last line had me on the verge of tears omfg

I love this story 33 ps. do you have tumblr?

It just keeps getting better !

Zuko: Do you 'love' Katara ?

Greeeeat Chapter !

Truly evil:)

Oh and this has no significance what so ever but the quote you used I had to write an essay about.
Okay that's it...

Whoa.

And Idk if it's too late but question for Bowen: Do you currently have a girlfriend/love-interest ?

Omg yes! I LOVE YOU! He's back :)
Oh and Bowen: you're one freaking amazing bender. I can't imagine how hard that was.

Well I wonder what happens now

Hmmm

Really good start.
Lu is acting a bit jerky though, but I guess I understand why.

You should do another bonus chapter from Zuko's point of view. Maybe how he finds Katara after her throat is slit?

April Fools joke or not, I love this chapter! I'm starting to see more and more how Zuko and Bowen foil each other. Bowen is charismatic and unafraid to show his vulnerable side to Katara, while Zuko still tries to keep up appearances. I love how developed these characters are. Whether OC or your own version of an ATLA character, they are all well-rounded and fully worth investing in emotionally. I think that's what I love most about your story and your writing. Thank you for this wonderful fic and please continue to grace us with your lovely writing!

Yay yay yay and now I can die happy lol.