|Reviews for Why we are here|
| emmy92 11/2/12 . chapter 7
Interesting chapter...Would love to see something longer and a few of the little grammer mistakes fixed but I defs enjoy reading your story so I hope you continue!
| Tempe4Booth 11/3/12 . chapter 7
as long as you stick with it and do the best you can you'll go great
| RawSon.M 7/18/12 . chapter 6
Awesome! I hope youcontinue soon. I think this is brilliant. I like the idea of Lawson and Shannon being really close mates and having childhood traumas please carry on with this story and please write more!
| Ella 7/12/12 . chapter 6
Hang on, is josh with grace or tash? I'm confusled. I like the idea of this story, I think like someone else suggested having a beta reader would be a good idea to fix the grammar issues. But I'm interested to see what happens with Shannon and Lawson :)
| Love the RUSH 6/28/12 . chapter 6
great chapter and great ideas, the only problem for me with this chapter was the grammer, you had paragraphs in the writing that were only one sentence, have you got a beta?
| Emmy92 6/8/12 . chapter 5
I hope you update soon, I really want to know where this story is going! I want to know what lawsons reaction will be!
update soon :)
| Love the RUSH 5/26/12 . chapter 5
great story please update soon!
| CarlyBee96 5/9/12 . chapter 5
Awwww that is so cute Katie calling Lawson daddy!
Anyway nice cliffhanger I wonder how Lawson reacts with the news
Great chapter :))
| SpinningTop-01 5/9/12 . chapter 5
Great chapter, thanks for the update!
Loved the inclusion of Shannon's daughter too.
Would love an update as soon as you can get one up!
| CarlyBee96 5/6/12 . chapter 4
OMG I really want to know Shannons secret stuffy
Really good chapter by the way
| CarlyBee96 5/6/12 . chapter 3
This is soo Good please I need more!
| SpinningTop-01 5/5/12 . chapter 3
Please update soon! Can't wait to see some Grace/Josh, would love if there was a surprise & they had a kid, like Josh described in Rush, with a blonde ponytail!
| CarlyBee96 5/3/12 . chapter 2
This is amazing keep updating as soon as you can :))
| kirst92 5/3/12 . chapter 1
Wow! Fantastic start! I really enjoyed it.
Lawson and Shannon massive cuties. I can't wait to see where you go with their relationship. I enjoyed the aspect of both Josh and Lawson knowing Shannon beforehand, and that they had to inform the crew. Nicely done.
Can't wait for the next installement! Hopefully soon?