Interesting chapter...Would love to see something longer and a few of the little grammer mistakes fixed but I defs enjoy reading your story so I hope you continue!

as long as you stick with it and do the best you can you'll go great

Awesome! I hope youcontinue soon. I think this is brilliant. I like the idea of Lawson and Shannon being really close mates and having childhood traumas please carry on with this story and please write more!

Hang on, is josh with grace or tash? I'm confusled. I like the idea of this story, I think like someone else suggested having a beta reader would be a good idea to fix the grammar issues. But I'm interested to see what happens with Shannon and Lawson :)

great chapter and great ideas, the only problem for me with this chapter was the grammer, you had paragraphs in the writing that were only one sentence, have you got a beta?

Hey there!

I hope you update soon, I really want to know where this story is going! I want to know what lawsons reaction will be!

update soon :)

great story please update soon!

Awwww that is so cute Katie calling Lawson daddy!

Anyway nice cliffhanger I wonder how Lawson reacts with the news

Great chapter :))

Great chapter, thanks for the update!

Loved the inclusion of Shannon's daughter too.

Would love an update as soon as you can get one up!

OMG I really want to know Shannons secret stuffy

Really good chapter by the way

This is soo Good please I need more!

Please update soon! Can't wait to see some Grace/Josh, would love if there was a surprise & they had a kid, like Josh described in Rush, with a blonde ponytail!

This is amazing keep updating as soon as you can :))

Wow! Fantastic start! I really enjoyed it.

Lawson and Shannon massive cuties. I can't wait to see where you go with their relationship. I enjoyed the aspect of both Josh and Lawson knowing Shannon beforehand, and that they had to inform the crew. Nicely done.

Can't wait for the next installement! Hopefully soon?