|Reviews for Ranma 1/2: The Darkness|
| Ranmaleopard 10/4/11 . chapter 2
this is extremely interesting please continue!
| one who walks the path of fire 9/11/09 . chapter 2
| Innortal 11/24/04 . chapter 2
Not bad. I can see several possible outcomes with this story. I notice how the outers have yet to make an appearance, so you may want to have them arrive in the next chapter, as I can see Hotaru (Saturn) finding a bond with Ranma, as both are seen as outcasts. The idea with Setsuna is the correct one. She is lonely, and without the presense of her friends, she may very well become the bitch everyone sometimes write her as (all work and no play).
For Saffron, I imagine it well come close to hurting Ranma's mother, before Ranma does the impossible and either Kills the Phoenix God or purifies him, whichever you wish for.
You may wish to send more powerful creatures after Ranma, as he does seem to beat them easily. A counter weight to this may simply be to have Ranma begin to deal with the darkness he is absorbing, trying to purify himself so to speak.
Good luck and please continue.
| dogbertcarroll 8/18/03 . chapter 2
Penance Stare was cheesy, as was a group of men planning on
abducting a women out of a restaurant to rape and kill.
It's way off the SOP for the type of people who engage
in those activities.
Saffron should still be a child. He also doesn't lay eggs.
1. Hes male 2. He's the phoenix. They only have one and it
never ends so no reproductive cycle.
The scenes with the SM cast were well done.
| dogbertcarroll 8/18/03 . chapter 1
You really wussed out.
The Shin Goku Satsu would
have been an excellent place
to build on who Ranma is. He
is facing his sins after all.
Leaving that out takes away
from the story.
Meeting Genma should also have
been a blue ribbon affair as he
talked to him and set aside his
anger at his father.
I did like the scene with Genma and
I think the scene with Happosai should
have been expanded as well. You seem to
gloss over what should be character
Heheheh. Ryoga is Happi's next target!
Couldn't happen to a nicer guy.
You're great on the physical details
but you skimp on the emotional context.
| cao cao 5/25/03 . chapter 1
u still alive?
| Sired 4/6/03 . chapter 2
nice story havnt seen anything like this done before update!
| Platinum Man 1/14/03 . chapter 2
intersing story please continue...
| Mystic Neko-chan 12/17/02 . chapter 2
This is one of the few Ranma 1/2-Sailor Moon crossovers I've read and LIKED. In other words this is really GOOD. Please continue this fic._
Note: It's considered 'proper english' to begin a new paragraph when a different character speaks; otherwise it might be hard for some people to follow who's saying what.
| Ryoko Inua 10/9/02 . chapter 1
I wonder if we'll see more of this fic soon.
| CRose 9/13/02 . chapter 2
I have the same opinion on this part as the first one. Everything needs to be expanded out and it will be and excelent fic, there were a couple of spelling errors, but nothing to big to mention. Good luck, I still say this has lots of potential and with a bit of editing it will be a hundred times better.
| CRose 9/13/02 . chapter 1
This is a great idea, it has tons of potential, and it needs to be rewritten. This is a large peice of work, but there are plot holes in this that could fit a planet. I noticed in almost ever paragraph sentences that could have easily been expanded into several pages or whole chapters. Ranma's battle with Ryu took all of two paragraphs and all of a sudden he's the best there is to be? No way.
The biggest thing this fic need is and expansion, over half of this is a description of details that could have been expanded out to show what happened and dramatically increased the size and quality of the story a 100% or more.
| Danny Chin 8/24/02 . chapter 2
This is a good story about Ranma/saiol moon. In the next story will u write about ranma having to fight saffron to the death? Hope u finish the next fanfic soon!Good luck!
| DaimonHellstorm 8/7/02 . chapter 1
Well, I just got banned from delphi forums on fanfiction in one post. (DarkeRaevan). Thank you fearless leader, you've taught me how petty fanfiction authors can be. After my third chapter of this story, which will incorporate everything I've learned from your forum as a whole, I will not be posting again. goodbye.
| DaimonHellstorm 8/7/02 . chapter 2
Well, I just got myself banned from fanfics at Delphi Forums in one post. (DarkeRaevan). I'm going to finish up the third chapter, with everything I learned from them, and never go into fanfiction again. Thank you, fearless leader. Goodbye.