I think that this story is awesome and I realy hope you continue and don't give up Just saying oh and I can't wait for the next chapter like realy CLIFT HANGER

I REALLY love your story!
Keep up the great work!
Spirit has been my favorite movie for AGES too.
The book is really good though.
When will your next chapter be up?

Ooohhh lala! What in gorlogs name will happen next!? This is just a random price of info, mares cannot lead herds. A stallion would come and fight the lead stallion. If the stallion wins than he becomes the lead stallion. Lead stallions always choose a lead mare. The lead mare help the lead stallion.

I love this story! I hope you update soon.

omg I LOVE THIS can you please keep going?!

love it! will the next chapter be loaded soon?

hey peoples! i don't know if you're gonna check the reviews, or not, but i decided to put a review on my own story without logging on (im such a smarty pants) to give anyone who does a quick update. so, schools started and i have more homework than i've ever had in my whole life. im gonna try to get another chapter or two out on weekends (yaayy no homework!) by the end of october, but i don't think i'll be able to anything during november. why? i signed up for a thingy (actually, a junoir and adult thingy by the same people for the same basic thing.) basically, you have to write a whole 50,00 word novel by the end of the month. i thought it might be fun to see what happened. i'll probably fail, but it would be fun to try. check .com or my profile for more details

This is a great story so far. I can't wait for chapter 7! You're doing a fantabulous job! Keep it up!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!YOU'RE NOT DONE!? its a great story BTW.

please make another chapter the foal could be a black filly with a star on her forehead called Belle a very nice foal who is a brillient jumper pease make another chapter please i'm desprate!

Pleeeeeaaaaase keep typing up this incredible story. I want to know what happens next and I also want to know what happens to Star! Keep going! I'm loving this story so far! Fantabulous job!

Please don't give up on this story! It's well written and I love thatyou don't waste time on two paragraph long descriptions (When you've read as many Charles Dickens' books as I have, you'll appreciate a story with more action, less scene-setting) Also, this cliff hanger is driving me crazy!
If/when you get to the cavalry base-camp, that is where you'd really want to paint a picture. As a fellow fanfic author myself, the depressing and sadistic scenes need to hit imagination and hit it hard. Of course, you may choose to write whatever you wish, but that's my personal advice. Hope I helped and motivated!
-CityCat

Updateeee

:O wow is wonderful! i luv it! :'D the suspense is killing me lol cant wait for the next chapter :)

please continue!I love it! update soon :) oh and by the way can you do the chapters a bit longer? thanks