|Reviews for A Chalice in the Atelier|
| Guest 5/18/13 . chapter 4
It was awesome; really, I can't think of a way to describe how enjoyable this story has been so far. Keep up the good work.
| Guest 5/17/13 . chapter 3
Really sweet and sensible.
| Sola Bistren 5/6/13 . chapter 1
I like your Medaka Box reviews most of all. Do you plan to write more?
| detrametal 2/28/13 . chapter 4
very well written, funny and true to the characters. job very well done
| Arashigan16 1/27/13 . chapter 4
Nice, this is really nice. I look forward to seeing what you will do for Mukae and Hansode.
| overlord7 1/10/13 . chapter 4
| Darkforce222 1/7/13 . chapter 4
Still somehow both hot and completely adorable. I guess pulling that off is a Kurokami family trait or something. Good work!
| vivaz 12/19/12 . chapter 4
I wasn’t suprised that Naze made a move so that she can be „happy” with her Zen-chan (just after reading the last line of chapter 3 I had a suspicion that in the next chapter there could be some love-triangle between the Kurokami sisters and Zenkichi). But I’m very positively surprised how you solved this issue. I was expecting something else but what you wrote is much better! Zenkichi having his „dark side” that he fears to „awaken” so he won’t hurt his beloved. And Naze whose not afraid of it, she even desires it, wants that Zenkichi would „use her” to release his frustrations, that she will be an object of his "relief". Woo. Great :D Keep the good work!
Now I’m also curious are you going to continue this mini-cycle in your drabble/one-shots collection (ch3 and ch4 are connected with each other, but I don’t see any clear references to ch1 or ch2. Of course I could be missing something or you are planning to use it in future chapters?) by adding another girl (girls?) to Zenkichi’s „harem”. Hope you will write more :D Cheers!
| vivaz 12/19/12 . chapter 3
Not much to complain about – great chapter. Medaka realized what she wanted with Zenkichi thanks to Naze and Naze plotting something behind the back of the newly couple creates a need to (wait and) read the next chapter. And this chapter is a very good intro to the situation/action/plot that you described in ch4.
PS Sorry for the „review spam” but writing all in one post would been too troublesome ;) And because this is a drabble/one-shot each chapter needs a separate one ;)
| vivaz 12/19/12 . chapter 2
Poor Zenkichi for beeing in the middle of the show :D jealous and slightly awkward/clumsy Medaka is fun to read, Najimi – as always „bored” and teasing her „Zero” (I can imagine that her „attire” was something similar to the Venus swimsuit from DOA XBV game) but from all 3 „shop scenes” the one that liked the most was the one with Mukae – you’ve potrayed her well during that scene: she’s bit of ashamed and embarased about showing herself to Zenkichi but she’s also slightly provocative in her actions propably because she wants to ignite some reactions in Zenkichi, and it’s working :) Great
| vivaz 12/19/12 . chapter 1
Hi! Ive just created this account so Im propably going to write a review on each chapter :) First of all great thing that you are planning on creating a „Zenkichi/Harem” series. Sometimes I feel sorry for Zenkichi, that he has so many „cute” girls around him but he only sees Medaka „in that way” so reading about his „interactions” with other females is always interesting :) I know that he isnt the main hero but Nisio could suprise us with something after the Student Council President battle arc but he didnt – or maybe this will be the next/future arc if the manga wont end after defiting Iihiko?
But back to your work – ch1 – good ZxM, actualy I dont have any complains to it. Interesting approach that Zenkichis „Parasite Seeing” is straining his eyes (sadly, from what I understand his PS was altered to Altered God Mode so we wont know if it had any impact on his eyesight). So yeah – good work :)
| Guest 12/16/12 . chapter 4
Well...This'll be fun to see if it ever goes any further.
Though, I can't help but wonder about Kikaijima :P
| Akytsu Frozen 12/15/12 . chapter 4
well this was a very expected and interesting outcome only surpased by the situation this will unleash regarding Zenkichis mother, but more than that the fun that will be is almost uprareous! XD
Well hey nice seeing a good guy doing something nice, in my case im a nurseman and i have the night shift at my clinic during xmas so hope you can ejjoy becouse i will be surely not! XD
| Guest 12/15/12 . chapter 4
Greatest thing I've read about medaka box fanfic
| Shini Namikaze 12/15/12 . chapter 4
Ur story if very interesting especially with the harem plot. I can't wait to read more to see how this will turn out. I personally think. Zenkichi needs more of a better roll in the series and I like how u portrayed him and I hope to read more of this story or any other Medaka Box fictions you write.