This is a beautiful story, something I wish everyone would read, then find the beauty in themselves. Well done (keep writing).

Anita

Beautiful, I love the message at the ending, and it was written Proffessionally. You're a really good writer.

Who-oa...

That was extraordinary. :') Really quite striking.

The context is sweet, but the words really stay with you after

you are done.

Beautiful work. *claps* Well done. :)

Merlin

Such a beautiful poem! I really like the incorporated imagery.