this is a interesting story, can't wait to see wait happens net.

This is AWSOME please update soon *puppy dog eyes*

I'm back! I say "I'm back" a alot. Maybe I'll say it in German the next time ...
back on the subject, I like this chapter to. Jesus, you've grown on me so much I can't give proper critique! I'll just point out stuff and ask questions, then.
"Gregor Collins" I'm super perceptive, remember? Since they didn't tell us his last name in the book, you gave him thr surname of he author! Smartness ...
And when does this take place in both series? I'm a little confused.

welcome back, shoudl get interesting now that they are in Regalia.

Hiya!
Merry Christmas, Happy Kwanzaa, Feliz Navida, Happy Hanukkah, and whatever else I forgot to say and/or you celebrate!
I finally finished the Underland Chronicles (I kept losing my copy of the Code of Claw for six months straight) so now I can read this! I like how it started, I have no complaints whatsoever. I will take my time and read a chapter every two days. Now that fix with Danny having a brother... I'm gonna make your inbox explode! Consider it my present to you ;D

Its Waffle-flavoredPancakeIATD. I'll tell u there's a kid in my class, and he lobes to joke about pancakes. Waffle-flavored pancake was very funny to me. And IATD is for my old pen name IAmTheDaydreamer.

Merry Christmas to you XD

*wipes tear from eye* I thought I'd lost you man. If you need any help just ask. But give me some guidelines.

More Please!

MORE MORE MORE! I WILL KILL MY SELF IF YOU DON'T UPLOAD MORE!11

more please

UPDATE PLEASE!

Ohmygod yes! Hurry up and update!

YAY! UPDATE! :D

Epic, plz update! I didn't know you read The Underland Chronicles? I do I love it I am finished with the seiris.