 emi-87 2008-10-21 . chapter 9Oh come on! Try to finish the story...it's quite nice..;) |
 Fia 2007-02-02 . chapter 9 LUV IT!
It's been a year since you updated this story, but just wanted to stop by and say that i hope you update soon, because this is an awesome story! |
 Sunshine Fia 2006-10-19 . chapter 9 You know...I have just realized that over the past year...I have read this story twice...but have yet to leave a comment...i mean review...(dumb myspace!) Anywayz...it has been longer than 6 months since you have updated this story, mind you, you are probably busy with school and a job. So I would just like to say that I love your story, though I'm a bit confused...is Galaxia acting as Choas? Or is she her own person? Hm...Anywayz I hope to see another chapter out...soon! LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT! |
 Lulla 2006-10-03 . chapter 4 oh please continue this cute story of yours! |
 Liz 2006-10-03 . chapter 9 plz, plz do continue! love the story!! |
 Soleil-Lune 2006-06-20 . chapter 9=P~ Cliffie! And it's been *checks calendar* four months now. LOL
I don't know what you mean about a 'butchered' story line but I'm seeing a well-made, cohesive and over-all perfectly done story :)
You've really made me a fan of your stories. :D |
 Immortal Sailor Cosmos 2006-04-11 . chapter 9ya know what I just Realized? Princess Serenity has not been taught how to be a Queen! I mean, she has been taught how to act, but theres no real substance behind the acting, thats all it is, is acting. Thats what I think is really why shes jealous of Kakyuu, because she know what it really means to be a Queen, her mother trusts her with that knoledge, while Princess Serenity does not know what to actually do, her mother does not let her possess that knoledge. If Queen Serenity were to die tonight, Princess Serenity would be incapable of taking her place instanly! Thats just sad! Your own replacement can't replce you because you will not allow such an ability to be bestowed upon her! How un-monach-rulerish! At least thats what I think it tells us with all this insight into their minds. Even thought there is no real Original-Authur proof to almost any of what your saying, it is so entierly BELIEVABLE! That goes to show just what a Great Authur you are! I love this story, and would BEG you to please keep writing it!
~Imortal Sailor Cosmos |
 animeangel088 2006-02-05 . chapter 9good fic. |
 1lilstar 2006-01-15 . chapter 7 Personally, I can't get enough of this story it is awesome and there are spacific parts that I love and others that I really like but when you put it all together it wake one kickbutt story. so keep ug the great work. |
 Venneh 2006-01-15 . chapter 9If you're going to take liberties with the storyline, you might want to put AU or slight AU in the summary. People have been known to catch heat for that on here...
Excellent chapter, even though I knew what was going to happen before everyone else! XD I like how you're starting to develop the Seyia/Usa, along with the introduction of canon... oh, and Endymion (XP blah).
Can't wait to beta the next chapter! ^^ |
 Venneh 2005-12-02 . chapter 8So... you still looking for a beta? Cause you have a willing one right here. Send me a reviewer response with your answer; if yes, I'll send you a message with my e.
I cannot say this enough: excellent, excellent, EXCELLENT fic. You keep everyone in-character and write beautifully, despite English not being your first language, which, in this hellhole of a site, is a very rare thing, indeed.
Keep it up! |
 Venneh 2005-12-02 . chapter 2Yei! A good S/U writer who's alive and kicking to some degree!
You have an excellent story going here; I'm surprised that it hasn't gotten more reviews.
Ah; seems that you're stuck in that hell known as writer's block. >< My suggestion? Watch StarS through again, you're bound to get some ideas that way. XD |
 Fantasy or Reality 2005-11-29 . chapter 8I am really intrigued by this story and I do hope you continue it as I can't wait to find out what happens next. Excellent job. Keep it up. |
 Suki 2005-11-29 . chapter 8Finally, some U/S action! ^-^ |
 Suki 2005-11-29 . chapter 1This is good so far, quite the mystery. I have to read further to find out what's going on . . . |