|Reviews for Don't Break the Rules|
| SamanthaButt 4/1/13 . chapter 26
Okay, ohmygod, I love this story.
But I have one question- I'm kiinda confused about Elder Church. Is his first name Brian or James? Cause in some chapters, I see Poptarts with Brian, and sometimes, it's James. Yeah I'm kinda lost there. So I would be glad to know!
| FutureElderPrice 3/24/13 . chapter 12
Omgosh your reference to Andrew's parody of Toddlers and Tiaras :):):)
I love this story haha
| jb-ar-love 2/4/13 . chapter 25
I freaking love this story :D Every time I get an update I give an obnoxious fan-girl shriek :D I really love how happy the Elders are and how amazing the characters are and... and... and... I just love it :D
| jb-ar-love 1/19/13 . chapter 1
I really like these stories. They're really fun and just enjoyable to read :)
| Guest 1/10/13 . chapter 1
I absolutely adore this fanfic! It's creative, funny and original, I laugh out loud several times reading each chapter. I think the personalities of each character are unique and unteresting, which is great because often I find that fics consisting mostly of ensemble characters are mundane and boring, due to one collective personality. Speaking of ensembles, I've also enjoyed the scenes featuring the Ugandan ensemble characters too, for the same reasons. I especially enjoyed Mutumbo's parts! Technically speaking the story is well written, flows nicely, has correct spelling and is grammatically correct, which is a bonus!
Here are some of my favourite chapters so far:
- Chapter 2: Never Be Alone
- Chapter 5: Dress Conservatively*
- Chapter 6: Do Not Participate in Musical Groups*
- Chapter 8: Do Not Sleep in the Same Bed as Your Companion
- Chapter 10: Do Not Handle Explosives
- Chapter 13: Do Not Drive Without a License
- Chapter 14: Do Not Go on Road Trips*
- Chapter 16: Be a Frugal Photographer
- Chapter 17: Do Not Play Full Court Basketball*
- Chapter 19: Do Not Waste Money on Unnecessary Items*
The asterisked chapters are chapter's I'd LOVE to see a sequel to/ a similar type of story.
I think you are a very creative and talented author and hope you keep writing this story for much much longer!
| Hogwarts Student 11/20/12 . chapter 23
I love it can't wait for the next update!
| blue1rose2 11/7/12 . chapter 23
Lol this one was so adorkable and funny!
(btw i was too lazy to log on)
| anon 11/7/12 . chapter 23
Oh my god did they have sex on the twister mat?
This was a hillarious chapter XD
| guest 11/7/12 . chapter 23
haha! Great update! I can't wait for the next.
| BlueRose1313 9/13/12 . chapter 21
| gottalovepixar 8/20/12 . chapter 19
The fact that Elder Davis is reading a copy of Cosmo. XD
| gottalovepixar 8/16/12 . chapter 18
So I didn't realize there was a new chapter until now! The ending was hilarious, and Elder Michaels WOULD be without a shirt! Haha
| BlueRose1313 8/15/12 . chapter 18
| I Love John Gallagher Jr 8/14/12 . chapter 18
| BlueRose1313 7/7/12 . chapter 16
I was trying not to laugh but i couldnt help it this was hilarious!