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| Reviews for Day One |
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  Guest 7/8/12 . chapter 1 Well I like this. I mean you assembled a unique team and showed a side of Zantana and Flamebird the show fails to capture |
| Tara D 6/19/12 . chapter 1 Except for that one little slip up with the spell, I really did enjoy this. This Zantana is a lot of fun and I like her relationship with Flamebird! |
| SJ 6/13/12 . chapter 1 Just heard about this little gem and I got say for a one shot it sure packs a punch. I think its a remarkable piece and I love the two stars. |
| Star 5/20/12 . chapter 1 Oh boy I love this! Its so cute and way better then what's current. |
| Euphamisim 5/16/12 . chapter 1 I think its cool that you integrated a possible mission in between with the training. I also love that you explored the relationship between the two characters. Nice job. |
| Lori Mavity 5/14/12 . chapter 1 A delightful short story that has a unique flavor of ingredients. Good job. |
| Danielle 5/11/12 . chapter 1 Well I don't know much about this stuff, but I can tell you put your heart and soul into this. I like girl's who aren't afraid to get their hands dirty. I think it was adorable to have your main girl, Zantana? Magician Girl? have a crush on that guy. Good job. |
| Lacey 5/10/12 . chapter 1 I never thought I see the day where you get Cassandra to beat up Zantana without prompting! I hope that in the future Magician Girl works at using her muscles! |
| Candy 5/10/12 . chapter 1 Hey, I think this is awesome. Sounds like the youngest get the grunt work, but oh well that's life! |
| Tova 5/9/12 . chapter 1 Hey girl I really love your story! Its just so brilliant the way you write teenage girls and how unfair they think their fabulous heroine life can be! I believe in you and I think your going far! |
| Marnie 5/9/12 . chapter 1 I've really enjoyed learning more about your writing style. I think your grammar has improved. I love your transitions, but you need to really work on your pronouns, but overall what a fab one shot. |
| Agent G 5/9/12 . chapter 1 Unique one shot that showcases how badass females can be. I love what you did and you should be proud. |
| fanficfan001 5/7/12 . chapter 1 Well what a cute little one shot. you've come a long way since you first started. Keep up the good work. |
| Slickboy444 5/6/12 . chapter 1 Your character choices are unique because its not completely cannon, but this is AU. I really am liking that you wanted to show how female heroines do things. That bit with Jason Blood was great. Good Job. |
| Rhetoric of Sushi 5/6/12 . chapter 1 I like the focus on two characters who aren't normally paired up. Your idea could have been pushed a bit further, but I do like waht you were trying to do. |
