Just discoverd this story and am finding it engrossing. Like your characterisation and the face pace of the plot development.

yey! sequel in works! come out with it soon- i'm dying to know what happenes and who the hell is the guy wandering around?? :)

love it love it- natalie's cool, you write her well. keep it rollin :)

thanx for the background info! it helps clear things up a wee bit. go for the double :) :)!

great! now you gotta explain who this nick guy is-i'm getting curious! keep it up :)

dundundun! and she makes a connection! great so far- keep it going! :)

love it love it! keep going- i wanna see who this guy is.. :)

once again- i love it! the shipperness is great :) keep it coming!

wow wow wow! great 1st cahpter- makes me wanna read more more more! i love it :).

i like this story cant wait for the sequal!

gimme more please

Eyes Missing? Eyes Not There? Eyes Scratched Out By A Ballpoint Pen? Sorry, I've had a long day. great fic

I loved Forever Knight, and the end... WAHHH!
I'd love a double happy ending

I think you did a good job with this story - no need to be so tentative. Next time, just write your heart out and don't be so apologetic! You're allowed to write whatever you want, that's the whole point of FF.net, and I for one think this story is really creative. I like the scope, the fact that you have a lot of different POV's from varied characters, and that there's a lot of angst, but still a strong plot. Good story, thanks for writing it!

this story is great! i love the M/L interactions. i cant wait to read the next chapter!

peace