|Reviews for Feathers: Blind|
| alistarsmusic 5/14/13 . chapter 34
Gosh, I always like when you write in Zenith's POV. It gives me the chance to read from someone's else perspective and hear their voice in my head. And I always hear Zenith clearly the chances I get to read his side of the story. I don't think I'm that surprised that he would feel the way he felt towards Archer because even in the beginning when they found him hiding out in the trees, he was kinda tense and thats when his control started going haywire. Thankfully, everyone that doesn't rival his inner demon helps it calm down. But I feel so bad for him! He feels left out when Archer and Zan hang out together and talk about stuff and just totally ignore him. I know how it feels so I comprehend his hurt. But I am surprised that Zenith straight out told Archer he has to hit the road. That was kinda blunt...But if he's worried that Xeno is going to go all team Archer too than I would want him outta there too. And what Xeno said last is kind of starting to worry me. If it's true than what the heck is going to happen? Is she really meant to be with Zenith or be with Archer again? I don't think I like even the slightest possibility that he has a second chance with Anon's reincarnation. And what is Zan going to feel or say? He's already bonding so much with Archer I would feel just as jealous as Zenith and be pissed if someone told my bonding buddy to leave. And Luido...that was definitely a first. I never thought he would ever go all serious, even if for a split second. Anyways, can't wait to know what more happens next!
| alistarsmusic 5/4/13 . chapter 33
Wait...I thought Archer was the guy Xeno was looking for in the mountains? If he isn't than there's someone totally different who helped her and her friends out? And has Archer only begun helping them out while they've been in hiding from the other demons? At least that's how I'm seeing things now but I'm not sure if I'm right or not. I'm glad Zenith is still looking after Zan's back even if he's being chummy chummy with Archer right now. Which brings me to this question, why is that? My first thought was that Zan feels some sort of connection towards Archer because he's Anon's mate from the other realm they came from, but could there be another reason? Maybe he wants to know more about his sister that he doesn't know about already? And Luido's reaction was weird. I think he remembered the Archer from before and was scared of being treated like a lowly demon again. But I can't know for sure whether Archer's a completely different person or the same. I hope their food scavenger hunt goes alright!
| alistarsmusic 4/26/13 . chapter 32
I hope happiness is not too fleeting to last forever. I feel that Xeno has been through so much already that she doesn't deserve to have the one thing making her happy right now taken away. Even if it's currently or at a later time. I also hope that things don't happen the same for Xeno and Zenith the way they did for Archer and Anon. That part was so hard to read I almost cried. And if the same happened to Xeno and Zenith I think that would be even harder. But I'm still not sure whether they should stay in the world their in right now or not. Not only because of Julius but because I'm not sure how safe it is for them to live somewhere where the time goes a lot quicker than it seems and where things change and shift too. But will they ever be able to escape this world their in? And I'm still confused about the whole Archer thing. Is he the same guy from before or another Archer from a time before or after what we all know happened to him? And what is he doing there now? What does he mean he was trapped? I hope some of these answers can be answered soon!
| alistarsmusic 4/25/13 . chapter 31
The first thing that came to mind in this chapter was the way Luido talks. I never noticed that he babbles the way he does before. And gosh! I can't believe he can keep on talking for long periods of time. Even reading in my mind the way he was talking was exhausting and I mentally had to take a breath for every few words. I wonder how he does it? And second, I am so surprised about the confession he made to Bliss about the way he acts. I never would have thought it possible for him to give such a serious answer if he hadn't done it this time. But he's right...why shouldn't someone use they're energy if they have it? I know I don't have that much energy to spare all the time but when I do I think I make the most out of it. And I'm glad he has someone to play around with because I don't see Bliss, Honey, or Xeno capable of spending time with him. And obviously Zan and Zenith either. And I think I know who that was in the end...Zenith's brother right? Because even in the last story with Anon she always thought they both looked like twins no matter the age difference. I wonder what's going to happen next? And why does he have the seal marks around his neck? I think he's the mountain guy Xeno keeps remembering about saving her right?
| alistarsmusic 4/18/13 . chapter 30
If Zenith hadn't said those last words, I would be so worried about where Xeno's and his relationship would end up because of the truth. But I think it's a little fun to make guys jealous because it shows you that they do care. And since Xeno seems to be able to hear and feel all of his emotions, she should know just how much she means to him. I'm glad she told him a little more too. I thought she would be so adamant about things like the man from the mountains, but now that she explained more about him I understand a lot more along with Zenith. And that comment she thought of him being bipolar was hilarious. I'm starting to agree with her too because he keeps going back and forth with his emotions, not that I blame him. It must feel different knowing that he finally found the reincarnation of Anon who is meant for him this time. Though I'm not sure whats to come but something tells me they are going to have to fight for their love. Thanks for writing more Xeno/Zenith moments! :D
| alistarsmusic 3/29/13 . chapter 29
Oh my! I can't believe it finally happened! And by "it" I mean the epic kiss that Xeno's been trying to avoid and deny for so long! I knew she wanted it as bad as looking at Zenith's lips made her feel, even when she thought she was going insane. I wonder if Zenith is going to ask her again about the coughing fit she had where he saw blood coming out? I actually thought he wouldn't find out for another few chapters but I'm glad he did. It's what somehow brought them closer together. But I think she needs to tell him why it's happening. I think Zenither would want to know and he would want to help her find a solution to get rid of whats wrong with her. Unless she avoids that conversation altogether? I don't really know...I know Xeno is finally opening up a little more to him but I'm not sure just how much. I think she'll have a few reservations about what she will and will not tell him. Even if he makes her feel all these nice things inside of her. And I love how she loves how he makes her feel inside. And I love that she told him she loves him even if it caught me off guard since she barely started having feelings for him. I can't wait to read more! I wonder if the next chapter will include more Xeno and Zenith moments? I hope so... :)
| alistarsmusic 3/20/13 . chapter 28
Why oh why did Bliss have to ruin some things? I feel like Xeno can't help but follow her lead because she trusts her more after all the time they've been together. Now she really wants Zenith and she won't let her emotions for him show because she knows how wrong Bliss will think that is. I wonder if Xeno is a fox like Anon was? If she was wouldn't Bliss think she was demon too? And that would confirm a bunch of stuff too. Like that Xeno is another part of Anon which somehow makes her Zan's sister and that Zenith did indeed find his part of Anon which is Xeno. But before anything happens I think there's certainly a lot more to come. Xeno still think there's a man living in the mountains that she met a long time ago and I'm still uncertain who that could be and whether he's really good or not. I also didn't like how Xeno's truth hurt Zenith. I felt really bad for him but I couldn't understand why something like that hurt him. The only idea I thought of for that was that he might think because that man saved Xeno, Xeno had some sort of feelings for that man than him. Or that she feels more grateful towards a stranger than him whose been trying to protect her since he found her. Anyways can't wait to read more! Hope Zenith isn't so mad in the next chapter.
| alistarsmusic 3/18/13 . chapter 27
So...I totally disagree with Bliss. I know Zenith isn't there because he thinks Xeno looks like Anon...he's there because Xeno is another part of Anon like Anon was another part of Raven. Right? At least that's what I think but I'm not a hundred percent sure. I also think Bliss is still untrustful of their new demon friends. It doesn't matter how kind Luido, Zan, and Zenith are compared to Julius. She see's demons and that's all she see's them for. But I'm glad Xeno has changed her mind about them. Especially about Zan because they are siblings...right? To me it doesn't matter whether she's exactly like Aela or not. I still think their siblings. And she has these urges to take care of Zan and comfort him just as Anon would have done and felt. I'm starting to worry about what Bliss told Xeno though. I know what she was implying to Xeno...at least I think I do. She wants Xeno to stay away from Zenith but exactly how far? Does she want them to get separated again? I don't think that would be a good idea. Hopefully they don't get separated again in the upcoming chapters...I'm also wondering when their going to find this man from the mountains. That is their next destination...at least that's what I think it is. As always update soon! Love this story!
| alistarsmusic 3/8/13 . chapter 26
I knew there was a reason why I was always drawn to Zenith, his gentleness can make anyone melt and it's always done that for me. I'm so glad he has his own story. I was almost afraid that something was wrong with Zenith...that he was lost to us but I'm glad I'm wrong...well maybe. I'm still not sure if there's something wrong with him. Especially when Xeno pointed out how she's seen those red eyes of his before, but now I'm wondering where? And that dream started out nice but the end would have scared me too. So has Xeno had that beach dream before? I can't help wondering because she mentioned it to Zenith but I wasn't sure if it was true or she was just making something up so she wouldn't have to tell him about how he was in her dream too. I don't think Zenith would have taken too well on the fact that he was in her dream and suddenly transformed into Julius to drown her. But I still love that last part! I wonder if something more is going to happen in the next chapter? Like a kiss? :) Can't wait to find out!
| alistarsmusic 3/5/13 . chapter 25
"A cocky idiot"? lol I wish I could have laughed out loud but reading this in a library full of other students would only get me crazy stares...
Okay, so something is really, REALLY wrong with Zenith. He's turning bad isn't he? Is it because of the deal he made with Julius? Or is Julius pretending to be Zenith? Or is Zenith affected by Julius and Zenith is also the demon with strange red eyes that Xeno saw before and Zan sensed too? I'm trying really hard not to guess or overthink everything but when it puts Zenith at risk from not being his easy going self, I get worried. I think Xeno is going to look more into it soon. Hopefully Zan helps out. And Xeno was right, Luido is somebody you can't really say no to. I call him a grown demon that's literally a kid at heart. I can't wait to read more! The story's currently a big puzzle I need more clues to solve.
| alistarsmusic 2/28/13 . chapter 24
I never expected Xeno to ever, EVER admit something so huge like that. Not to anyone or even to herself. I wonder why she finally admitted that? Though I can't say she would tell that directly to Zenith. He'd bug her about it for a while. And was Xeno really crying? I wonder if she's going to deny it later on...? I think I was just as tense as Zan was when he thought there was someone else out there...But something told me it might be Zenith...though the way he said "is anyone home" didn't sound anything like him. If anything that would be Luido...I wonder if Zenith is going to explain how he found them? And I can't believe Bliss and Xeno have been friends this whole time when I thought Xeno didn't like anyone and only cared about saving her own butt? That was pretty shocking...And who's Raven? I wonder if she's going to show up later on? And will the mystery demon with red eyes be revealed soon too? Update soon please!
| alistarsmusic 2/24/13 . chapter 23
Okay that last part was almost to tangly to get it...but after reading it twice I do get it. I wonder if something is watching them from afar? And who would it be? My first thought would be the person who have Xeno her blindfold who she's looking for as well, but I'm still unsure. Maybe he's protecting them from afar? Or could it be that other bad guy? And I think Zan changed a little because the time he gave himself to reflect on what he felt the day his sister died allowed him to accept that she was gone and that he was in fact mourning for her. It broke my heart too. It was so heartbreaking what he went through once he realized Anon was never coming back for him. I wonder if Zenith remembers that day too? And what his thoughts were when he saw how sad Anon's little brother was from her leaving him? I can't believe it took two demon bodies to hold Zan down just so he wouldn't go after her. That must mean he's really strong...I can't wait to find out more!
| alistarsmusic 2/24/13 . chapter 22
I think it's really surprising when Zan lets himself be vulnerable. Since there haven't been that many times he's let himself be that way. I don't even think he allowed himself to be vulnerable when Anon was still there for him and alive. I wonder if Xeno is really Anon in another world? I think that would help Zan a lot. Especially from all the pain he keeps living through from losing his sister before. And why did Zenith get jealous from learning that Xeno is looking for someone other than him? Unless that's the exact reason...that he's not the one she was looking for. I think he hoped she remembered him sort of and was looking for him but I'm not so sure. Although I am curious about this other person Xeno is looking for. I wonder why he gave her her blindfold? And I wonder why Bliss is finally being sort of reasonable? She's really gone a long way from the way she used to act in the beginning. That is also very surprising. And Luido! I'm trying to understand why he would get so frustrated with that story he was reading to Cinna? I guess I'll never know...
| alistarsmusic 1/24/13 . chapter 21
I wonder how Zan knows that Xeno's soul is the same as Anon's? Is it because she kept his soul in that hourglass around her neck for a while or something else? Or maybe I'm just thinking too much into it and it's just because he knows Anon would have preferred to keep her own pain instead of transferring it to someone else just like Xeno said. And when is Xeno going to find out that Zenith is back, safe and sound with Honey fairly unharmed? I bet she's going to be happy that he's back but I don't think she'll want him to know she was worried and waiting the whole time he was gone. Although I can't say the others will beat her first and tell him though I'm not sure. And is Zenith going to try to figure out what Xeno's secret is? Or will he jus directly ask her? I can't wait to read more! There's a lot more to come, I know.
| Guest 12/16/12 . chapter 20
What Julius proposed as a bargain doesn't sound good at all. I feel like more bad and horrific things are to come soon...I wonder if and when Zenith finds Xeno and the rest of them, if she will remember everything just like Julius said she would or if that's going to take a while? And will Julius find them and kill Zenith? I don't think I could bear that...and especially after knowing that Zenith still has deep feelings for Anon. That hearing Julius talk about her reminded him of the pain she left him with...although the plus side is that Zenith got back Bliss and Honey which is good but at the same time he was given an unfair compromise, and without even agreeing. Julius just snapped his fingers and disappeared without another word. I wonder if Zenith will start coming up with plans to divert things from happening the way Julius said they would? Or will he just let things continue on and hope it doesn't come to it? Will he even tell Xeno about what he found out in cost of saving Bliss and Honey? Will Zan want to help too? I can't wait to find out more! Even though I'm dreading what might and might not happen...