|Reviews for Normal Human Teenagers|
| NyteKit 12/27/12 . chapter 1
Ha, so very much Kurama. Being able to hide memories does come in handy when keeping such a long-term secret. Although I did not see that coming here. And I can't believe I missed this from so long ago. I'm going to have to get back to reading YYH fics.
| Death101- Fox Version 9/27/12 . chapter 1
Damn. I was hoping he wouldn't do that. Oh well. I loved this story. It just seemed awesome to see them acting normally and enjoying themselves. The ending was... well I suppose it should have been expected but I didn't quite catch onto what he was doing until it was too late sorta thing. I loved reading from Shiori's POV though and it was interesting the thoughts that went through her head. Just two things though.
Her boy wouldn't normally have needed a reminder."
The sentence had a quoation mark for some reason and I think it's just a typo. Also at antoher point in the story the story inserted a new paragraph in the middle of the sentence:
trying to dispel
They aren't large mistakes so I wouldn't worry too much and the story was still get regardless. Awesome job!
| LynLin 9/20/12 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this!
| KiWiLov 7/10/12 . chapter 1
update soon please i really like it
| Jaganashi 6/27/12 . chapter 1
Ah! I love your writing! I'm sure your inbox has been filling up with story faves sporadically over the last couple of weeks, but without the reviews that should accompany them. I'm getting to it!
I love seeing Kurama merge his lives. I hate to think that he never spends time with the other boys outside of some case or trouble in the Makai. I'm sure Shiori would indeed see these particular boys as being rough around the edges! I still like to think of them as being welcome friends at his home.
Their interactions while playing the video game were priceless. Every since the episode where Kurama expressed some experience with such games, I've been curous to see him playing them outside of a life or death territory. It just seems like such a normal teenage thing to do, when as you pointed out, I would suspect that he doesn't exactly have 'friends' over.
And of course, Kurama's gentle but tactful way of handling Shiori is always a pleasure to read. Loved it!
| vidocq 6/23/12 . chapter 1
Great fic, I love the characterization and the story :) Kurama and Shiori's relationship is so tender, that's really cute :)
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet 6/21/12 . chapter 1
Happens when your son used to be the most powerful fox-spirit in existence. ; Excellent story. :D
| The Countess of Monte Cristo 5/13/12 . chapter 1
What a surprise finding this story was! Excellent as always!Your yyh is superior! Oh, Shiori...
| Reyka Sivao 5/6/12 . chapter 1
Huh. That was interesting! I liked the way the boys were playing video games like normal kids, and Shiori's reactions were perfect. :)
| enchantedsleeper 5/4/12 . chapter 1
Awwww, that's so cute. I always feel sad when reading fics in which Kurama/Shuichi can't be completely honest with his mum even though he loves her so much. But it was sweet to see her so happy that he'd brought friends home xD I wonder what she'd think of Hiei, haha...
| Guest 5/3/12 . chapter 1
Dude, YES. Amazing as always, but I tottally agree with that one reviewer... I would LOVE to see more of your fics where shiori and Hiei interact! But, yanno. I mean, if you were to...say, write a sequel to this with a little KuramaxHiei stuffs goin on in there, I would pretty much die in a pretty much fantastic way. I mean, I mean, ANYTHING you write with those two makes me squeal with far girlish delight, but...having shiori and hiei interactions is just-I can't even. And i mean, it could be tottally innocent, like this one...or yanno...it could be...not so innocent hed really need the dream pollen then, eh? Heheheh...but, srsly, your fantastic. Please continue forever! 3333
| Hedi Dracona 5/3/12 . chapter 1
I really like this one. I feel kinda sorry for both Shiori /and/ Kurama.
| Pheonix09 5/3/12 . chapter 1
That was amusing and excellent, I loved it and awesome job but you should make a sequel to this when Hiei comes over with the other two and soon please
| Dragon Ashes 5/3/12 . chapter 1
Awww. I love the boys playing video games. Poor Shiori must be so confused...Kurama really is a whole different person around her. He tries so hard to be a good son. It's cute.
Anyways, great story! Happy writing!
| Marikalay 5/3/12 . chapter 1
I liked it alot and your writing is excellent as usual. Thank you for sharing.