This is beautiful and wonderful and epic! I have loved the 5th episode and here you are, putting words where my brain was just blank with the strength of the pictures. Amazing job you have done here, I would love to translate it into French if you don't mind. Obviously, you will get credits. And by the way, you are a star!
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Any chances for a sequel to this? X]p

Nice depth

Smart.

This was good! I loved it!

great story! i know it is marked as completed, but is there any way you could continue with the story and their relationship - making it AU, probably? i just feel like this could be a start of something new and intriguing :-)

While the TV shows suck beyond recognition, this is a really lovely description of that episode.

It is pretty amazing how you can describe her part of the episode so well. Amazing.

Very specific and intense, the way you wrote this. It made the scene much more interesting than it's supposed to be.

You captured Jaqen very well. there are so few Arya/Jaqen fics out there but they are well written. Would love to see more of a romance angle (yes, I'm THAT girl) but I know it would have been more than a little weird considering that you were writing young Arya. It was nice to see inside her head though.

By far this is the most intense scene of season 2. You showed beautifully the whole tension between them. Can I expect another Jaquen/Arya from you?

I've always loved Arya and Jaqen. They don't get nearly enough time together, though as she's in training, I live in hope! Great fic, hope you continue it.

This story is sheer awesomeness and amazingness embodied. Perfect characterization (and Jaqen H'ghar is a hell of a character to write because ugh, he is Faceless) and your style is very lovely; perfectly flowing. I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!

I liked it. It was a nice one-shot, but you basically re-wrote the scene I already saw.

So, how do I begin? That was magnificently written and described.

First of all: I LOVE YOUR STYLE. My favourite line is probably the "not fire, never fire; burns with ice because she's a Stark, and the ice—its bites are frosty and deadly and hurt" Also, the description of Jaqen H'ghar drives me mad because it's too bloody perfect. :D

I'm also happy that I'm not the only one to ship Jaqen with Arya. I love their depth and their chemistry (after all, Arya's monologue later in the series is mostly about Syrio and Jaqen).

So, to conclude: I wish that you write more and more about these two, since it's enough story with them. Nevertheless to say that your style and writing skills are perfect for them. :) KEEP ROLLING!

Love,

Etspera

PS - Also, Tom Wlaschiha kidgsvjijsdvjksdgjksdg