|Reviews for Gone|
| divergentdandelion 2/6/13 . chapter 1
Awwww I love it that is so sweet
| nepalipranshu 9/22/12 . chapter 1
I was really surprised when you said that Tris was pregnant!
| Haha 9/21/12 . chapter 1
I laughed at first from the beginning because he was all worried when he got up and he was actin all dramatic LOL but its a good story so far I'm lovin it :)
| NarutoRockLee98 9/20/12 . chapter 1
Are you going to continue the story? I love it!
| jandjsalmon 9/9/12 . chapter 1
oh ouch! Really really good! (and sad but good)
| 13halle1 9/8/12 . chapter 1
This story has no purpose and does not make any sense. You need to expand your thoughts and allow this story to have more emotion and make the reader think.
| mercury 8/19/12 . chapter 1
The last few sentences are haunting. Its very well written. Thank you.
| Hufflelove412 5/6/12 . chapter 1
awwww! That's sad! Good one shot though.
| jamesandlils 5/5/12 . chapter 1
oh my goodness. that was just beautiful. at first I thought this was Tobias waking up after Tris left for Erudite headquarters, but this was even better. thank you for that, really.
| HJP-HJG-July31-1980 5/4/12 . chapter 1
Hi! I think that this was really cute love how no matter how long there together or if there married and she's pregnant with his kid that he still always fears that he'll lose her it's adorable and I loved it maybe u should considering writing full stories about four and tris? I'd read it !