Man... New villains around every corner. Kris really has a lot of people that have it in for her.

Nice chapter again. Can't wait to see what will happen. Keep it up!

Two new villains, huh? Nice chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Nice story dude really cool

i'm a bit confused at who's talking when you do a paragraph of what people say. Usually some just write a new line during conversation parts. But you might wanna slow your pace with the events,feels a bit rushed. But really cool story

Oh question since Kris is female does that mean she has a female version of Ray01? Like instead of Ray01's helmet she has red hair and and a female body like other female robos? Oh and what does Rahu's voice sound like? Like baby from dbgt? That'd be pretty cool.

long review huh? my bad it's Just such a cool story.

Hey, Ron, it's Cameron! I figured I'd just drop in and see how this is coming and to say that I'll probably be posting reviews when you upload chapters I haven't read yet, so keep posting!