|Reviews for M'lady|
| Lilian Violet 7/21/12 . chapter 4
:) why don't you send Brendan and May on a Pokemon journey, of course May will focus on Contest and Brendan will focus on his Pokemon Research. Maybe something else will blossom between them as well.
| That's my Jay 7/21/12 . chapter 4
Well thanks, and thanks. HElp would be amazing and I love your idea of the whole flashback chapter.
On the shortness though, I agree. I should work more on length.
| PlernDraws 7/21/12 . chapter 4
Awww don't give up! Ive been through writer's block before, but ideas will always come to you! I really like this story so far, cute... but a little short for my taste. Each chapter kinda ends abruptly, although I love the characters very much (especially Gold ;D). I'll be more than happy to help you with this fic!
To be honest, the most developed characters so far are Brendan and Gold... You should give us a backstory of how Brendan and May met to give May more of a personality (which she is lacking majorly). Nothing is better than a flashback of young live blooming! XD
You should also write more about Drew. Love rivals can be good if they aren't overdone to the point of being annoying. Have Drew confront Brendan that he's gonna ask May out if Brendan doesn't. I'm just ranting here, aren't I? ._.'
Anywho, best of luck with this fic!
| That's my Jay 7/21/12 . chapter 1
IT was white because Brendan was wereing his hat during the photo being taken. So I guess the computer would think his headband was to keep his white hair at bay... or sumthin.
| Catrina7077 7/21/12 . chapter 3
Really like your story but i have a question, why would the baby hair be white if it's just a cap on brendan?
| blazelight790 6/9/12 . chapter 1
14 reviews? OK OK I'm reveiwing sheesh XD
Er... hi? I've been wondering where Drew is for the past chapters... I dunno why but I wanna see Brendan jealous XD
| That's my Jay 6/6/12 . chapter 3
I do agree with you, but when I saw 153 people that read it in a day with no reviews, I did feel somewhat discouraged.
| The New Outsider 6/6/12 . chapter 3
Shouldn't have to not update.
| blazelight790 5/31/12 . chapter 3
white hair... WHITE HAIR! BWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! I was NOT suspecting that
Keep it up! and my mom, she just raised an eyebrow at me XD
| DeltaRouge - Matigers 5/31/12 . chapter 3
Alright, nice job! And um, I like how the babies grow hair as soon as the pictures are in the slot. Very creative! Chapter 4! Chapter 4! CHAPTER 4! Now. :/ XD
| twinkling.daggers 5/31/12 . chapter 2
Sorry for the late review! Been kinda busy (not that anyone cares).
Good chapter esp. when GOLD appeared _ (inner fangirl squeals). This story gets more interesting albeit too early too say if it will be AMAZING ( but I think it will be). Only concern is it's length (but it's hardly a fault really).
I would love to help you with the story but i'm not really good at creating/writing a fanfic. Making original stories is more of my forte. So, for the meantime all I can do is review and criticize your story. If by chance an idea pops i'll be sure to let you know!
I know it's long so i'll stop it here.
Good luck! (nya)
| Lilian Violet 5/30/12 . chapter 2
XD Gold is something else, a pratical joker. Now that I recall I have seen Brendan in some of the small cameo of some Pokemon movie. X( Too bad he's not seen in the actual anime; he tops Drew's rose foppa anytime. :) Nice chapter, update soon!
| HikaruUchia aka THEUCHIAHOKAGE 5/20/12 . chapter 2
great story love the ending to chapter 2
| blazelight790 5/19/12 . chapter 2
Gold made me LOL so much there! 'OMG I'M INNOCENT SIR!' and the part when he's all like 'I'm not gay!' made me ROFL, well, with my mom staring at me hehe '
I'll be looking forward to the next one!
| BlueRedRosa23 5/13/12 . chapter 1
So good! Gah! This story the beginning was soo good! BRENDAN COME ON MAN WIN MAY'S HEART! I BELIEVE IN YOU!
And to tell ya the truth I never did like Drew, but love Brendan X3 This story ish so good! :D
I await future chapter just like this one that was good :D