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unknown
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
loves it go on!
Alwaysright1
2004-03-24 . chapter 3
I hope you havn't given up on this story. It's a great read!
Update soon!
Ruby Moon
2003-08-14 . chapter 3
I like your style of writing. Very poetic and flowing. The way you portray Remy and Rogue's thoughts and feelings is written beautifully: blunt and honest, artistically descriptive. You will continue this, right? Please do.
Ima Super Mute Ant
2003-08-09 . chapter 3
Wow. Thats really elequent :) good job.
leidiavolo
2003-06-16 . chapter 3
please update soon
Lilmisstiff
2003-05-30 . chapter 3
this story is so sad I can fell my heart breaking 4 them its still a good story

2003-05-04 . chapter 3
When are you going to update?
Morphimal
2003-03-05 . chapter 3
This story is entrancing. Also, your mix of emotional and physical descriptions/details is better than many well-known authors, and adds a distinct flare to the characters that draws the reader in.

The only problem I have are the slight editorial errors, but that's mostly because I've been editing stories/papers for my classmates since junior high (I'm in college). If you'ld like someone to help with editing, I'd be more than willing. (Admittedly, this offer also comes with the selfish reason that I'd be able to read the next part before it was posted.) ;)
kittiekat
2003-02-26 . chapter 3
Dear God this is the best Remy/Rogue story I have ever read. Ever. You write so beautifully and just.ah! It's so good! One of my favorite lines is "Demons and Angels cannont mix." That's just perfect how they both think the same thing about eachother. They need to get togethor.now! Please keep up the good work! :)
Berry Toastman
2003-01-20 . chapter 1
I lIKES IT!
keep writing, we'll keep reading!
Best Of Luck
~ Berry (Crystal)
dstrbd child
2003-01-19 . chapter 3
i like this story a lot. plz write more and update soon.
bunny angel
2003-01-08 . chapter 3
wOw. *wipes traces of tears away* it better now end here..or i will .-_-. it's so beautiful. you have great insight. *sits down to wait for the next chapters*
Lyrit Liltrick
2003-01-06 . chapter 3
From another none-french person: I thought it was pretty good..lol, from what I could translate it sounded good at least. :-D

I liked the change of Remy's history with Belladonna, it suited your purpose well and added to the developement of Remy, I think. The part where you talk about his 'collecting' is good too. Lol, that's so Gambit.
Tamashii No Ryu Sakura
2003-01-06 . chapter 1
I love this story could you check out mine. Its called Forrbidon Memories. and again awsome story.
Samman
2003-01-05 . chapter 3
Wohooooo. So you're back. This story was absolutely fantastic.Now that you're off from your writers block i hope that you'll upload your chapters more frequently, right? :) okay good. And hopefully, we will have some Rogue/Remy *dialogues* in the next upcoming chapters, right? ^_^ Again, you're an awesome writer and keep up the good work...and UPLOAD SOON! :) And yeah, thanks for the smoochies. :)
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