|Reviews for One step forward, Two steps back|
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 17
Cool nicknames, the "creative" made me laugh. Hooray for the use of sarcasm, I havent read Eddie saying any thing sarcastic yet :)
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 18
I hope Jara decide not to keep their relationship a secret, every one knows they are amazing together, now they just need to embrace their awesomeness - a quote from another cinderella story :)
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 19
Its great how you have kept all of the characters themselves and that you havent changed who they are. For example - Alfie is still as alien obsessed as ever :)
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 20
I like the scene at the end, its nice to see Jerome acting slightly out of character, it shows that Mara really is having a positive effect on him.
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 21
I hope Eddie and Patricia get back together soon, they bring out the best in one another :D (Jara quote) I hope Jara are back together soon, as I know I have probably said at various points, but they are soul mates, its hard not to say :)
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 22
Paradoxes are cool :) I hope Mara and Eddies idea goes to plan. Im so glad he and Mara are friends.
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 52
Thankyou for the wonderful happy ending and the amazing story, I know you have finished it writing now so I cant wait to see what you write next. However, I just wanted to say despite the story being complete, and the reviews being up to 300, Im going to try and get more people to review, so that not only will the reviews be up to 300 and beyond but they will get up to 400, and hopefully even more, because this story was one of the best I have read on fanfiction and this story and you deserve the credit for the great ideas and all the hard work. Well done and happy writing! I must go back and review the previous chapters I missed now :)
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 51
Im glad they found Mara. Its so sad though, that things are still so difficult for every one, I hope theres a happy ending :(
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 50
the tears are literally streaming down my face, Poor Mara. She would never kill some one surely? its just who ever is keeping her hostage? I hope shes rescued soon, it must hurt Jerome equally as much as it is hurting Mara, to have to see her go through all of that for a second time.
| pianoplayer01 8/19/12 . chapter 49
I feel so sorry for them all, because they were all so upset about Mara leaving, but they treated her so badly about one of her biggest dreams when she is always so selfless and encouraging of what every one else wants, but the way they treated her was probably just a way to hide what they were really feeling about Mara leaving. I hope Jara get back together and that Mara is going to be ok. Its turning in to some sort of ghost story now, not in the sense of ghosts but as in those board games where you have to guess who did the crime, and if Rufus fell from the rope ladder bridge I have no idea who has taken Mara. The suspense!
| pianoplayer01 8/18/12 . chapter 39
wow its like the first episode, you have created time transportation and made this even better and readable :) I thought there was going to be a food fight or some thing lol
| pianoplayer01 8/18/12 . chapter 38
Jerome and Poppy are equals so I think they might be the first two to get to the mask, or Jerome and Mara if they work as a team as they tend to do because their Jara :D I cant help it, Im actually picturing them as super heroes
Eddie - the chameleon
Jerome - The wolf
Poppy - The cub
Mara - The tiger
Alfie - the monkey
Joy - the snake
I gave them animal code names - Im strange I know but its just what I thought
| pianoplayer01 8/18/12 . chapter 37
maybe Amber and Patricia? I have no idea :) lol - "thats not very original its just the house name" I giggled when Alfie said that, I am now team Anubis - sorry Sibuna.
| pianoplayer01 8/18/12 . chapter 36
wow cant wait to read next chapter :D the suspense! Im glad every thing is ok between every one now. I did not see Joy spiking the punch!
| pianoplayer01 8/18/12 . chapter 35
I dont know what to think about every thing now, people keep changing, thats not a bad thing just confusing :) I mean its just hard to know Mara would do that to Jerome or Alfie and yet I can understand it too. Mind boggling :)