wow. is good.

Wow SO good how is Isabella gonna know about Keith raspberry very soon what will they new hold be called I like the name Melissa plus Melissa is in one of Jacqueline Wilson books the worst thing about my sister write more

Now this is what i call a great story! This is fantastic! :)

I really enjoyed it. It's a whole new look on things, this is much more interesting than the ones of them still loving each other. Please write more?!

Really good plz make more!

I loved the premise of the story and the story line and the way it was going, but, this is constructive critiscm, but jsut could have been written with more depth. I felt you rushed a lot of things, like when Rax and Prue meet or how Rax behaved. You then mentioned something about a half-brother but didn't go into detail or how much of a significance it was to Prue. Almsot as if you were just stating fact after fact and rushing it all without really explaining it or giving it meaning... All I gotta say really and good luck on future endeavours (spelling). The story line was good, just work on giving it meaning and making it deeper :D

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