I wish this is what had happened in the show! I had loved Blanche's loving stories of George. And when they had said that he cheated on her I was very upset! Couldn't they have left one marriage alone?! But excellent story as usual! Could you write more George/Blanche stories? As I said before I love them together!

That was perfect. I wish it had worked out like that in the show.

this was nice but sometimes like now u just have conversations and dont have their thoughts or any background. Not every1 sees every episode. U could do 1 paragraph like this.

"Blanche recalled how she learned about George's illegitimte son. (Give a sentence of detail, maybe another where he is now.) She decided she had 2 confront him about it."

It was good otehrwise, though, n wouldnt have to have that but i thought it would help. i haven't seen much of the show but i think u do a great job here n in this fandom in general.

firstly, your writing stinks

secondly, get an editor

thirdly, you tend to rush things - stop that!

now, i will point out the good things of this story - there weren't any except it was short and didn't flow.