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| Reviews for Jurassic Park |
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   Thunder strike 07 5/22/13 . chapter 1Pretty cool. I really liked this and the way you wrote it I could easily imagine myself there watching this! Super job! |
| DK334 2/27/13 . chapter 6 I really am enjoying this story. The only thing i have to say is that there are a few grammar mistakes but other than that this story is good. |
| MoonlitSorrows 1/22/13 . chapter 9 So I really like this story because even though there are a lot of Alan's daughter/BillyxOC stories it always starts w/the 3rd movie, not the first. I liked the conflict between Alan & Dawn. However, I do think it would be a wise decision to have a Beta so that they could edit & make it a little smoother. A little side note iPods weren't sold back then &cell phones were mostly used by business men (there are no apps that teenagers would've been on then). Even though this story was published a while ago, you still get new readers, I hope this review could help with any improvements. |
| Guest 1/10/13 . chapter 9 please make Jurassic park 3 soon! this stuff was freakin awesome! Am I'm |
| scarlet tribe 12/28/12 . chapter 9 loved it |
| storywriter1994 8/13/12 . chapter 9 Nice, but i feel you rushed the end a bt much, though it had my heart pumping. Good job |
| Cajunny 4 life 8/12/12 . chapter 9 Incredible! Sorry if I didn't review sooner :) |
| blackangel150 8/3/12 . chapter 9 wow |
| Cajunny 4 life 8/3/12 . chapter 8 Great chapter. Waiting on more :) |
| ECKohns 8/1/12 . chapter 8 Great cant wait for the next chapter do you think you could do the sequels |
| blackangel150 7/31/12 . chapter 8 damn y did he stay up there? |
| Toxic Medley 7/27/12 . chapter 2 This would be a really good story if it wasn't so full of basic grammar mistakes. You should look into getting a beta reader to help you correct your grammar. |
| Cajunny 4 life 7/26/12 . chapter 7 AWESOME! :) |
| Cajunny 4 life 7/17/12 . chapter 6 Awesome! This chapter was awesome! :) |
| Destiny Xavier16 7/13/12 . chapter 5 More please! |
