|Reviews for Jurassic Park|
| Thunder strike 07 5/22/13 . chapter 1
Pretty cool. I really liked this and the way you wrote it I could easily imagine myself there watching this! Super job!
| DK334 2/27/13 . chapter 6
I really am enjoying this story. The only thing i have to say is that there are a few grammar mistakes but other than that this story is good.
| MoonlitSorrows 1/22/13 . chapter 9
So I really like this story because even though there are a lot of Alan's daughter/BillyxOC stories it always starts w/the 3rd movie, not the first. I liked the conflict between Alan & Dawn. However, I do think it would be a wise decision to have a Beta so that they could edit & make it a little smoother. A little side note iPods weren't sold back then &cell phones were mostly used by business men (there are no apps that teenagers would've been on then). Even though this story was published a while ago, you still get new readers, I hope this review could help with any improvements.
| Guest 1/10/13 . chapter 9
please make Jurassic park 3 soon! this stuff was freakin awesome!
| scarlet tribe 12/28/12 . chapter 9
| storywriter1994 8/13/12 . chapter 9
Nice, but i feel you rushed the end a bt much, though it had my heart pumping. Good job
| Cajunny 4 life 8/12/12 . chapter 9
Incredible! Sorry if I didn't review sooner :)
| blackangel150 8/3/12 . chapter 9
| Cajunny 4 life 8/3/12 . chapter 8
Great chapter. Waiting on more :)
| ECKohns 8/1/12 . chapter 8
Great cant wait for the next chapter do you think you could do the sequels
| blackangel150 7/31/12 . chapter 8
damn y did he stay up there?
| Toxic Medley 7/27/12 . chapter 2
This would be a really good story if it wasn't so full of basic grammar mistakes.
You should look into getting a beta reader to help you correct your grammar.
| Cajunny 4 life 7/26/12 . chapter 7
| Cajunny 4 life 7/17/12 . chapter 6
Awesome! This chapter was awesome!
| Destiny Xavier16 7/13/12 . chapter 5