This is pretty good overall. I had a feeling Skoochy was lying. I suppose he'd rather have them be admiring than fearful.

The whole group kind of reminded me of the Freedom Fighters from the previous series.

Just a couple of minor mistakes: you said "please" instead of "pleasure," and "started" instead of "stared."

I should probably read The Thief Lord; that's by Cornelia Funke, right? I've enjoyed her Inkheart books.

Haha, cool story! Who was Skoochy again?

Awww (: i love Skoochy, ever since he appeared in The Revelation. He, (besides Bolin of course!) is probably my favorite I love this little oneshot, and it did not suck! It was really good (: nice job, RBH. (Is it okay that i shorten your name?)

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