|Reviews for Dreams and Nightmares|
| aku no tensai 3/27/13 . chapter 4
Holy mother of goats, I just realized how long my last review (for chapter 5) was! So sorry o.o
| aku no tensai 3/27/13 . chapter 5
Hn, this is pretty good but I think you're getting somewhat caught up in your own twists in the story, and are kinda downplaying what Momoshiro did to Ryoma
The latter of the two above is pretty self explanatory and is a tie-in with the other, so I'll only go into detail about the former.
By "getting somewhat caught up", I really mean that this chapter was a bit...odd. I'd say confusing but it wasn't (that's a good thing!).
It's just that, Momo raped Ryoma after he knew of Ryoma's and Fuji's relationship. Not too mention that Ryoma said it himself when Momoshiro kissed him in the Science Lab just before the assault. So Momo knew full well what he was doing and why when he did it.
To suddenly throw in a twist where he claims that it wasn't entirely his fault because "someone (Tezuka) told him Ryoma was single!" is nothing but a weak excuse on Momo's part.
It isn't valid either.
Let's say that Momoshiro didn't know that Ryoma was in a relationship, with Fuji no less. It doesn't give him a right to corner, drug and force someone into sexual submission. It was rape. Non-consensual sex. UNWANTED and FORCED sexual advancement.
Even if someone told you "Go ahead! He's only playing hard-to-get" you don't do it.
So Momo's reasoning for why he made Ryoma's life a "living hell" is invalid.
So, more than "you're getting confused", I think it's "You created an unbelievable and unnecessary excuse for Momoshiro that I kinda hate." Teehee! That isn't to say that I don't like this story!
Beside that, this story IS pretty good! Spelling mistakes here and there, but they can be easily overlooked, the plot's good, Fuji's a major bitch (excuse the language!) as is Tezuka—though he doesn't appear much. And Fuji has—had!— a reason to be angry. Tezu's a backstabbing bleep at that.
Eiji is freaking adorable as always. Makes me want to ship him and Ryoma together as I'm sure a lot of other people do to w
I miss the other characters a bit, and the story seems a bit rushed but it's understandable. It's fiiiiine
So yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update again soon?
Good luck with the next chapter!
| Kurokokattlover 2/22/13 . chapter 5
plz write the next chapter
you are killing me! T_T i need the next chapter!
| AnimeLover4211 2/4/13 . chapter 5
WHAT!it ends there...NO NO NO NO!Need more!
| Aase 1/23/13 . chapter 5
Nice story, sends me shivering in a corner thinking of what has happend to Ryo and of his state of mind.
Plz don't end up killing him by mistake.
| MikiYuri 1/8/13 . chapter 5
Er ma gard. I posted the review for this chapter in another of your story 'for you, id be.' I love that story too. Since i posted my review there for this story, i will now post my review for that story here. Sorry for the confusion. But i cant edit my review... :(
At boss is tezuka right...? :B why- how can he do such a thing?! And do you not like tezuka? You keep making him the bad guy both in this story (dreams and nightmares) and that (for you, id be) not that i mind, just sayin'... Anyways! Good job and ill look forward to the next chapters for your stories!
| Ciel D'or Serendipite 1/6/13 . chapter 5
OMFG I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR AN UPDATE FOREVER! *Cries-tears-of-joy* PLEASE MAKE THEM HAPPY SOON! *SUPERHUGS*
| Crazyanimelover1289 1/6/13 . chapter 5
Hmmmmmmmmmm... I think I know! :DDDD Mou... poor Ryoma... I hope he'll be alright... and that FUJI WILL JUST APOLOGIZE! I'm glad you updated this story, it's amazing and I can't get ENOUGH! :D
| Tiger723 1/6/13 . chapter 5
oh my holy waffles! O.O shizz is going to happen. and THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!
Omg! i cant believe Tezuka did that! wait, yes i can -.- at least within this story(which by the way is complete awesomeness)
I still think you should hold a tennis camp soon. Cause i know that the other teams wil immeidently know something is wrong. i mean, imagine this. Seigaku is split into three groups. Group one are the observers: Inui, Kaido, and Oishi. Group Two is the portectors: Momo and Eiji try to hid Ryoma from group 3. Group Three is the attackers: fuji and Tezuka. Then, split everyone into those teams. Like have Tezuka trick the other players but also have eiji get people to help Ochibi.
Its just an idea that doesnt need to be used. :) It could be a sequal too.
| Sachiel Angelo 11/10/12 . chapter 4
Yes Ryoma! Find new love. There is still the royal pair. I am sure Atobe would be there.
| 07Eve 10/10/12 . chapter 4
I agree that Eiji and Ryoma should be "brother"
| Tiger723 10/9/12 . chapter 4
Although I am a neko lover, I'm glad Eiji is only acting as a Ryoga replacement.
Just a thought on what u could do:
Have Ryoma go to the doctors, get the report from him prooving what Momo did to him. Then, have Eiji steal it and force Fuji to read it. In your face stupid angry Fuji.
GO BIG BROTHER EIJI!
| MikiYuri 10/9/12 . chapter 4
Moar! Btw around how many chapters does this story have?
Oh ryoma... Let me hug you kiss you shower you with love! -throws flowers around ryoma-
| Catkac 10/8/12 . chapter 4
Damn, I had wanted some Neko Pair action! Maybe a threesome, fufufu. XD
| Ciel D'or Serendipite 10/8/12 . chapter 4
Yay! You updated! Wah Syusuke...I just really wanna kick him where it hurts. Really, really hard. Momo too. That bastard. Tezuka...can get off cuz I think he really doesn't know the whole story. Eiji gets a chocolate truck. Ryoma I will shower you with happiness and kick the bastards