|Reviews for A New Warrior's Prologue|
| IamAdam 10/9/12 . chapter 1
I don't know if you'll read this, or if you care, but Boletaria is the country of Demon's souls. And since this is posted in the Dark souls category, and contain two characters from Dark souls, Im guessing you want to write Lordran instead.
Other than that, I had no problems with this.