great fic :) will it ever be continued?

Keep going! This is a great story

o wow i like it i like it, i'm a big fan of animorphs and witchblade, when i saw this i thought it might be ok, but it's GREAT, i'm really likein it and it's only the first chapter! keep it up.

My first reaction was to freak out at the thought of Rachel's having the Witchblade. But hey, it turned out okay. Man, ilove this story!

Cool, your writing gets better with every story. Continue if you will.

Other than the ocasional spelling error (like Erek's name, for one), this is a good story. Is the Witchblade from a comic book? I think I remember seeing something with that title... Anyway, good story.

Rachel with the Witchblade...hmmm, THAT'S a scary thought! Although, if you gave Tobias all the Darkness powers or the Angelus, that'd be really cool.

A few grammatical errors (hehe that almost sounded like big word usage) and stuff, and that what does it prophet blah blah blah bit I s'pose was good but to my warped mind it just came off as lame coz of that stoopid I wish song with that stoopid guy in that stoopid scene how he *thinks* he's so famous & the best & everything ('coz U know with all the SUCCESS an' all recently...') and he's "speaking to his dead cloudy mother" or something... And the whole DRAMATIC "SO BE IT!" but I can SO C this becoming a dramatic li'l mini series or extremely long movie or something... To me it's more of a watching thing than a reading thing... This whole idea & stuff is really kewl, the story has FABulous potential, dah-link. HONestly, I'm SURE it'll be ALL the rage...

I just checked, and why isn't there a sequel yet?

achoo oh im sorry my i please have a klenex

more time wasted!

LEARN TO FUCKING SPELL BITCH! IT'S EREK! YOU SUCK!

All 3 r very COOL!

*MUCH* better! I'm so glad you improved the things that were wrong before! I'm proud of you Larania! ;)

Okay, that was so...COOL! Now if you don't wright a part 3... I'll...I'll bug you on message boards and bug you on reviews of other stories you wright! So please please,PLEASE wright a part 3. You know you could make an interesting series(?) about the Witchblade and Rachel. Now that would be realy cool! But Iloved it!