I love this story! So far. I won't to read more Ch's plz.

Ohhhhmygod I love this. Your writing style is probably the most fun kind for me to read, and the story is interesting enough for my very lacking attention span. Continue? :)

i love this chapter. I wish you could make a m rated story of austin and justin.

I'm really excited to see where this story is going! It seems so cute and fluffy, and I love the pairing and their dynamic you've developed!

Just a few notes (not flames) as you said you want constructive criticism. First, it's grammatically correct to start a new paragraph whenever someone new starts talking, and it makes it a whole lot easier to read and understand. Then this one is more of a personal thing, but I find that repeating scenes from a different POV gets a little bit repetitive, and I tend to either skim or skip over it.

That being said, I still really enjoyed this so far, and I'm excited to see you continue and grow as a writer! Keep it up and don't be discouraged by a lack of reviews! I love you, at the very least! :3

*Lesser-Than Three*