|Reviews for Devilish Games|
| xthefirestillburns 5/17/12 . chapter 1
Ah, new story! Tania, once again you have surprised me with your writing and have left me at a loss of words! It's been so long since I've read a good dark fic on this site, about two years I can imagine, but your story has pulled me back into the interest of loving stories like these so much. So here we are in a setting such as a Wall Street, it's dark, it eerie, and John isn't too familiar with his surroundings of the building owned by none other than Vince McMahon himself. First reading this story I would've never guessed that John would be a lawyer hired by Vince to defend one of his former workers.
I have to say, I'm not sure exactly why Vince wants John to defend Mike after the crime he's committed within his company, but I guess business is business and trust is the last thing on Vince's mind. I found myself smiling when he plus some of the other men were introduced, especially Paul - I've never read him in any of your stories, so seeing him, plus this totally different concept has made me even more interested in seeing what more you will out forth into this story.
Out of all the escorts that were seen walking around half-naked, John is greeted by none other than Stacy, who is portrayed as an escort herself, something you don't usually see her being written as, but I totally did enjoy reading about her. She's a rather mysterious woman, only trying to do her job of seducing the men who walk in and out of that building to sway them into doing their part with Vince. I could tell from the beginning the woman would leave a lasting impression on John and she did despite him being in a relationship of three years. Somewhere down the line, I can see John giving into temptation and ruining everything he has with the current woman he's with just for a night of lust.
Your English is improving the more I read your work, but as a suggestion it would be best to use, "I am or I will" in situations such as these, "I guess I'm (I am)". When using 'I'm' as you did, you're clarifying that the sentence is not yet complete. I hope I'm making this easy for you to understand. All in all great first chapter.
| my time is now 5/9/12 . chapter 1
Definitely something new from you. It is very hard to determine what goes inside the corporate world, but it sure is not pretty. John is going to be sucked into something he had never been before and i can see only his downfall from here. But if he can play his cards right, may be he can gain too. The mysterious woman sure left an impact on john and i cant wait to know her identity.
| Cena's baby doll 5/9/12 . chapter 1
Very different storyline here, love to see where this goes
| JorriexLover 5/9/12 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really! First story that I've read by you and it's very interesting. What I really want to know is who these women are.
| DashingsDestiny 5/9/12 . chapter 1
ok i didnt really understand the summary at first but after reading the first chapter WOW.
cena is about to get sucked into a whole new world tottally different to what he is used to by the sound of it.
there is lies, deceet, escorts, criminals it is a whole different ball game.
cena seems a little nieve to me on what he is getting himself into. i think he may be in over his head.
i think when the mysterious women approached him i think he may have felt like a teenager again. lol not knowing whats happening.
this is a very good first chapter and the summarry doesnt give too much away either which adds to the suspence.
cannot wait for the next chapter
| therealchamps 5/7/12 . chapter 1
Wow. Holy .I like this story so much right now. Its jsut awesome. Update soon.
| ChainGangHottieWithKillerLegsx 5/7/12 . chapter 1
Oooh! a new fanfic from you! I am intrigued! what a awesome first chapter! you have me hooked and I'm glad you took my advice on the name of your new fic- i feel honoured!
I'm so intrigued! John's a lawyer? i have a thing for guys in suits ;) and his girlfriend, please tell me it's stacy? in fairness as if you'd ever have him with anyone else! So who was the blonde call girl?
And why do they want john to help mike?
update soon :)