|Reviews for The Beggining|
| KeptinSight 6/23/12 . chapter 3
Please continue soon.
| sexbell 5/9/12 . chapter 1
i think you got a good story here
but you need a beta to help you as it is hard to read
| And 5/7/12 . chapter 1
You spelled the title wrong.
| Ugh 5/7/12 . chapter 1
You just need to stop. You obviously write yourself a glowing review and then delete any bad ones. If you won't take constuctive criticism to heart and, instead, insist on deleting them and deluding yourself, you need to just stop writing now. This might actually be worse than your other one, although at least a few of the 'I's are capitalized this time.
| mar 5/7/12 . chapter 3
WOW!This is fantastic iam totally hook. I read all the chapters they are awesome. When are updating ? Please, please:-)