Hello! Very good story! I really liked the way that Teddy was a bit clueless, and quite funny. You should continue and write another chapter about how Roxanne (Anne) continues being controlling and Teddy breaks up with her. And then you should write a third one about how Teddy and Victoire fall in love, and ride into the sunset on a hippogriff.

Anyways very good story! Keep writing! :)

-InLoveWithFred

PS I think you should write a story about Fred. He's hot.

Interesting. I like how Teddy was lost all the time. Though I have to agree with everyone about Roxanne. Sorry about giving her to you, again. Maybe next time it will be better.