Ooh, I really like this! Nimueh is great, even if she is a little creepy. Merlin, don't fall for it; fight the enchantment! Geez, everyone wants him for their own. Everyone is characterized excellently, even the OC you added wasn't bland or generic and I am quite interested by her. Can't wait to see where you're headed with this!

Genial fic!

continúa por favor!

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está interesante lo que pasará!

Update soon!

interesting i like it

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Enjoying the story, so far. You've written down Nimueh's personality perfectly. Smug and in-control. Can't wait to see what happens next!

i'm honestly half wanting nimueh to actually get merlin, and half not since that'd probably end badly...

Nimueh is really pulling out all the stops-even visiting him in his dreams-but she'd better deal with Morgana first.

Really looking forward to see how this will pan out :)

So she's enchanting him-hope he can resist the enchantment. At the very least, keep from her path of destruction and bloodshed.

interesting :)

I like how Nimueh retains that sort of 'edge' to her character. Like how she isn't just sweet or purely a 'love interest' but there's that dangerous potentially lethal streak to her, which makes it more interesting to read :)

Good luck with the rest of it!

Wow-I hope that vision doesn't come true. That anti-aging spell sounds pretty cool-I hope she gives it to Merlin. I just can't see Merlin killing Arthur or being responsible for his death.

keep going! It was just getting good..

This is a great story, but I'm slightly scared about what Nimueh is going to do to Merlin in his sleep.

I liked the talk between Uther and Nimueh-too bad he didn't believe her. I look forward to the talk between her and Merlin- and the persuasion she uses.

This is a brilliant story. I'm sorry you dont have many reviews but you deserve so many more. Dont give up im sure people will realise how wonderful this story is. Its nice having morgana the way she was and i really love the flashbacks. I really really love this story so thanks :)