A good start, though too early to say anything definite. Let's see how this goes, eh Ran? A helpful tip; for Kuma's speech, you can use "[]". Also, "YxZ"? will we be seeing more of Youka-chan, then? And, yay! Torai's in the house-er-woods! Lol at Ajimu also in her attempt to waste time...though I'm sure she has something under her sleeves.

I like the idea of the story very unique. Zenkichi vs Kumagawa good choice. Update soon.