I really like the way this is going, i like the way the characters are so true to form and everything, plus you've got just the right mix of humour/action/romance. please post some more soon!

Really an excellent story. You write so well, and the pace is perfect. I look forward to seeing what you have in store next!

I agree with Scroll about the Angel/Darla relationship. You write it very well! Personally I can't see Wes and Cordy, but that's just me. I like your Faith, too. And poor Spike!

wow ths is really good i hav 2 say. rite more!

I love this! Emma is not a Mary Sue at all, she's very clearly a 17 English girl (or at least our perception of one). Loved Gunn's "porn" bit, a nice humanising touch for Gunn and an inventive way to tell us Emma is beautiful.

Few nitpicky things: I don't think a girl of Emma's upbringing would be using Kleenex. Wes and Giles both use linen handkerchiefs, so assume Emma does as well. Also, don't know if she'd say "uncool", or if Hamiliton's goons would say "cops" while in Ireland.

Btw, love the Angel/Darla dynamic of old lovers/old friends feel, much more believable than any Angel/Cordy story I've read. Keep up the good work!

Mmm, not bad. You do have the same chapter posted twice though - can you remove one of them?