A nicely written little ficlet with good characterisation and some excellent images :) I did notice that there was one persistent error around dialogue- use a full stop/period when it's an action, and a comma when it's a speech tag. So for example:

He yawned, "A tired one."

Should be:

He yawned. "A tired one."

Good luck, and thank you for writing x

Cute. Did you know it's goin movie in 2013?