|Reviews for Sleep|
| Edhla 4/29/13 . chapter 1
A nicely written little ficlet with good characterisation and some excellent images :) I did notice that there was one persistent error around dialogue- use a full stop/period when it's an action, and a comma when it's a speech tag. So for example:
He yawned, "A tired one."
He yawned. "A tired one."
Good luck, and thank you for writing x
| 2whitie 5/14/12 . chapter 1
Cute. Did you know it's goin movie in 2013?