you said this was the first of ten, but where are the others? it was really good and i would like to read the others..

aww that was really sweet and adorable too. lovely little thing

great story

I love that song what a great way of portraying it.

Good job!

this was a sweet story

the third part of "Inner Resolve" from your website has a link to the next part that doesn't work...that is, the link doesn't work. thought you'd like to know. i'd like to read the rest of it.

Sweet, in a sad, warm and fuzzy, kind of way. Touching.

Bravo! I'm on my way to read more of this

wonderful story! The song tied in so nicely,

you almost forgot that it was there. :)

You need to read the Jedi apprentice books to get the real story of how Obi-Wan met Qui-Gon.

I have read all of the j.a. novels and still like different versions. this one is awsum. lets not be so closed minded to other ideas. you should go to the other site and read the other stories in this series they ROCK.

Neat enough. It took me a minute, and the lapses into the poetry threw me - the first one, I thought QG was singing a lullaby. But a good AU.

This story has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read! Such creativity, Kalynn. You deserve an award because of this story. *gives you a round of applause*

I loved it. I've already read the rest of the series, can't wait for more. The JA novels are good, but it's always nice to read a different take on what could have happened.

awwwwww...it's soooo cute