|Reviews for Charmed Alternate|
| WyaRose 4/18/13 . chapter 28
Hope all is okay with your husband! Miss this story 3
| Beppo1 4/12/13 . chapter 29
Hi I hope your Inspiration will come back.
I love this storry
| Marcus S. Lazarus 3/3/13 . chapter 29
The writing style felt a bit rough in places- some of your sentences felt a bit too fast to really convey the emotions being explored in them at first-, but the central plot was still interesting, I assure you.
The idea of the Halliwells meeting Paige without knowing how she is sounded simple but intriguing from the beginning, to say nothing of your first meeting providing an excellent set of circumstances to allow Piper and Paige to bond even with Prue still alive, and subsequent developments have been very interesting so far, to say the least.
Their discovery of Paige being a witch as well is introduced in a very natural manner without giving the Halliwells any reason to speculate that they’re actually related to her, and her new powers- with Prue still alive and hence no need for Paige to inherit her abilities- work out equally well.
Your use of original ‘cases’ mixed in with the pre-existing episode storylines was very well-handled- your plot with Loki was particularly good, although I admit that was partly because of the ‘Avengers’ or ‘Supernatural’ fan in me (More for the reference than the implication in the first case- I prefer Loki as the bad guy in ‘Avengers’-, but definitely for the implication in the second case)-, changing enough details to accommodate Paige while retaining the key essence of the original storylines, ranging from her being the target of the ‘dream doctor’ to the gradual development of the Halliwells’ bond with Paige.
She might still only be regarded as their ‘adopted’ ally, but there’s still a very interesting bond being developed between the four of them even without the knowledge of their biological connection; I DEFINITELY look forward to seeing what happens when you finally reveal Paige’s relationship with the others.
Hope you’re going to continue this story soon; it is FAR too interesting to remain as it is…
| A fan 2/3/13 . chapter 28
You should really update this soon before i explode into 100 little pieces. In my head, what i am saying is said in a hush, calm tone.
| Guest 12/4/12 . chapter 29
loved it more soon please
| lizardmomma 11/27/12 . chapter 29
very nice work, welcome back
| annaangel23 11/26/12 . chapter 29
I so look forward to your updates when they come, and I absolutely love this story! I love seeing Paige in all these episodes because, I don't know, it just gives something to the story. I truly can't explain it, but please continue! Update soon!
| WyaRose 11/26/12 . chapter 29
:( I'm so sorry, I hope your husband is okay! Obviously you should be spending your time dealing with that - fanfic should be stress relieving, don't let it stress you out especially when you're such a reliable updater under normal circumstances. Either way, I was so happy to see this chapter. I've missed the story and as always can't wait to see where you're taking things.
| Missycole23 11/26/12 . chapter 29
The ending waz funny middle child is the killer child lol ! Anyway do the sisters know that Paige is there sister or is it coming up
| kc1690 11/26/12 . chapter 29
I really like Paige being a part of this. I wonder how different the series would've been if all four sisters knew each other before the whole magic mess...
| ladybugsmomma 11/26/12 . chapter 29
Great chapter! I loved it! Keep up the great work!
| Shade 11/26/12 . chapter 29
Welcome back! I was wondering when u'd update and really glad when i saw the new chapter! Glad to hear that ur husband is getting better cuz kinda missed reading the rest of story ;p
I was wondering when will the sisters discover the truth about paige?
Please keep updating :)
| Nic T 11/20/12 . chapter 28
This was a great chapter. Not so much a long one nor an episode but i really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!
| teAmllorettAA 10/14/12 . chapter 28
I just found this story and I'm already hooked! I love how you rewrote the story lines to include Paige but I wasn't expecting that at first. But you've inspired me to write a story the way I thought it would be. I can't wait to see how you do the "That 70s Episode", with Paige involved. And I'm looking forward to "the woogy" episode. And I'm wondering why haven't you let her realize that she's half white lighter yet? Looking forward to more update soon!
| min786 10/12/12 . chapter 28
Aww heartwarming chapter...but way TOO short ! Don't forget to UPDATE ASAP ;P