| Reviews for The Forbidden Pain |
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DarkspiritYami 1/13/13 . chapter 15Wow! this story is brilliant! I love your YNG's and the way you bascily killed off everyone was epic! I LOVE THIS FIC! Love it! Your DSY! |
Silver-Haired-Thief 10/24/12 . chapter 14I like this ending. You should write a sequel for both endings! :3 |
DemetriaNecrophades 7/13/12 . chapter 14I loved it! XD lol although I think Bakura would have tortured Yugi more before killing him, but that's just me! I loved this though! *hugs Bakura* he finally won! makes me so happy! |
GinnNekoChanAngel 7/12/12 . chapter 14Ginn: okay bro I reviewed last time, but my Internet was a biatch and eff!ed up so it didn't show up. And it was really long and I didnt want to retype it. Which is especially a pain in the ass when I did it on my IPod. Ryujuki: So basically, your confidence was undermined because my aibou here is a lazy bastard. Sorry. Ginn: Sad bu true. Except the confidence thing. Even if you did feel bad I felt a lot worse Baka yami! Kureno: ((this is a review Ginn-chan)) Ginn: Oh yeah! I loved it! Pain for all! Pain! Die Yugi die! Kureno: Ginn that's not nice. Kureo: *starts shouting with Ginn* Kureno: KURY! Kureo: It's just my personality sheesh! Ginn: Why are you so surprised Reno-chan? He does this all the time! Ryujuki: Youre no better! Ginn: cool chap! |
DemetriaNecrophades 7/3/12 . chapter 13*cough* hahahaha... Okay! This was awesome, although I was hoping Bakura would destroy at least one orb! xD lol. Mayyyybe Tea's? Lol jk. It was a good chapter! |
DemetriaNecrophades 7/1/12 . chapter 12I'm totally waiting for Tea to die mwhahahaahahaha xD and poor Ryou I hope he has more to watch! |
YamiBakura1988 7/1/12 . chapter 12Great chapter |
GinnNekoChanAngel 6/30/12 . chapter 12Bakua: hahahaha! I am so amesome at this! Prussia: Kesesesese bitch please. Ginn: YAY Tea pain! Ryujuki: What is it with you and pain? Ginn: I'm a sadistic seme apparently! Ryujuki: So what, I would be your uke? Ginn: *thinking* hmmm... Yami-chan could be my victim... Kureno: not the time! Kureo: Interesting. Bakura really rips on Tristan doesn't he? Kureno: Maybe because Tristan is the biggest idiot. Ryujuki: Holy shiz! Kureno: What? Ryujuki: You insulted someone! That's Kureos job! Ginn: I wonder where Bakura comes up with these ideas... Bakura: Maybe I keep a journal of these crazy games. Ginn: OMG you write in a diary? Bakura: JOURNAL Prussia: there's no shame in having a diary. (he's got an effing library full of his diarys. Yeah he's old) Bakura: Gaaaaa! Idiots! Ginn: *death glare* Bakura: Don't even deny it Baka! Ginn: You're a Baka! Bakura: You! Ginn: You! Ryujuki: break it up you're acting like children! Ginn: I'm 13. Ryujuki: true. Kureno: Where do you even get a plain gray puzzle? Kureo: Was Bakura just conviniantly carrying these props around in Ryous backpack? Wouldnt it be weird to just open your backpack and go 'oh look a knife' Kureno: that happens to me all the time though. Ryou: Can I have sugar? Bakura: NO Ginn: oh sure! Bakura: No! Remember last time? Ginn: At least it wasn't vodka! Bakura: I wonder... Ginn: Don't even think about it! |
YamiBakura1988 6/22/12 . chapter 11good chapter |
GinnNekoChanAngel 6/20/12 . chapter 11Ginn: Yes! Torture the female character! Kureo: Why is it you hate anime girls so much? Ginn: They interrupt ore-sama's yaoi... Kureo: umm... Order: Anyways, it's interesting the games that you come up with in this story, Bakura. Bakura: It's a gift. Chaos: Wanna play a game with ME? Bakura: Sure. Chaos: Okay, whoever touches Ginn's head and gets the least injuries wins okay? You first! *shove* Bakura: Umm... *nerously touches Ginn* Malik: *getting drooled over by Chaos* Chaos: Someone get my whip! Ginn: *goes into a rampage* Bakura: CHAOS I WILL KILL YOU! *broken pretty much everything* Chaos: My turn! *pets Ginn on the head* Ginn: *punches Chaos in the face* Tenshi: Why am I the only mature on? Anyways, I liked the part with Ryou in the begining. The whole chapter was pretty good. Hope the next chap comes out soon :) Ginn: , { ] (this means I'm chasing a cupcake) |
The Bride of constant Vigil 6/20/12 . chapter 11Go Fluffy! Kill all the people! Ha Tristan...that I why you aren't the King of Games. |
DemetriaNecrophades 6/20/12 . chapter 11(is cheering for Bakura in the lines...until he glares at me) YAY such a fun chapter! can May die please (does puppy eyes) lol. D |
GinnNekoChanAngel 6/18/12 . chapter 10Ginn: Ah... Kureo: Yahoo! Serenity died sort of! (I hate Serenity) Kureno: That's not nice. Ginn: Well Marik who knows what's in store for you. Chaos: It was an intereting chapter. Interesting title too. Order: And why, Bakura, where you carrying a chain around? Bakura: Umm... long story. Order: I've got time. Bakura: MAYBE I SECRETLY DREAM OF CHAINING UP MALIK OKAY? Chaos: Sounds like someones in loooovvvveee... Bakura: I AM NOT! Chaos: Denial. Yup. He's definatly in love. Order: Hm hm. *strokes invible beard* Bakura: I'M SURROUNDED BY IDIOTS! Kureno: I wouldn't say that around Ginn-sama... Ginn: I WILL KICK YOUR ASS BAKURA! Bakura: Meep! (Even Bakura would be scared of a girl holding a huge black sword in a threatening manner.) |
DemetriaNecrophades 6/17/12 . chapter 10(tackle hugs Bakura randomly while he's dragging Marik away) ISNT HE CUTE! (then runs) Psh Bakura what a fine Basturd he is! D Giving the Orb to Yuugi like that. Oh well I still love him nice update D AND yay Serenity is down for the count I never liked her much lol. I'll be awaiting the next chapter ;) |
James Birdsong 6/17/12 . chapter 10 I liked these eight chapters :) |