Reviews for The Forbidden Pain
DarkspiritYami 1/13/13 . chapter 15
Wow! this story is brilliant! I love your YNG's and the way you bascily killed off everyone was epic! I LOVE THIS FIC!
Love it!
Your DSY!
Silver-Haired-Thief 10/24/12 . chapter 14
I like this ending. You should write a sequel for both endings! :3
DemetriaNecrophades 7/13/12 . chapter 14
I loved it! XD lol although I think Bakura would have tortured Yugi more before killing him, but that's just me! I loved this though! *hugs Bakura* he finally won! makes me so happy!
GinnNekoChanAngel 7/12/12 . chapter 14
Ginn: okay bro I reviewed last time, but my Internet was a biatch and eff!ed up so it didn't show up. And it was really long and I didnt want to retype it. Which is especially a pain in the ass when I did it on my IPod.
Ryujuki: So basically, your confidence was undermined because my aibou here is a lazy bastard. Sorry.
Ginn: Sad bu true. Except the confidence thing. Even if you did feel bad I felt a lot worse Baka yami!
Kureno: ((this is a review Ginn-chan))
Ginn: Oh yeah! I loved it! Pain for all! Pain! Die Yugi die!
Kureno: Ginn that's not nice.
Kureo: *starts shouting with Ginn*
Kureno: KURY!
Kureo: It's just my personality sheesh!
Ginn: Why are you so surprised Reno-chan? He does this all the time!
Ryujuki: Youre no better!
Ginn: cool chap!
DemetriaNecrophades 7/3/12 . chapter 13
*cough* hahahaha... Okay! This was awesome, although I was hoping Bakura would destroy at least one orb! xD lol. Mayyyybe Tea's? Lol jk. It was a good chapter!
DemetriaNecrophades 7/1/12 . chapter 12
I'm totally waiting for Tea to die mwhahahaahahaha xD and poor Ryou I hope he has more to watch!
YamiBakura1988 7/1/12 . chapter 12
Great chapter
GinnNekoChanAngel 6/30/12 . chapter 12
Bakua: hahahaha! I am so amesome at this!
Prussia: Kesesesese bitch please.
Ginn: YAY Tea pain!
Ryujuki: What is it with you and pain?
Ginn: I'm a sadistic seme apparently!
Ryujuki: So what, I would be your uke?
Ginn: *thinking* hmmm... Yami-chan could be my victim...
Kureno: not the time!
Kureo: Interesting. Bakura really rips on Tristan doesn't he?
Kureno: Maybe because Tristan is the biggest idiot.
Ryujuki: Holy shiz!
Kureno: What?
Ryujuki: You insulted someone! That's Kureos job!
Ginn: I wonder where Bakura comes up with these ideas...
Bakura: Maybe I keep a journal of these crazy games.
Ginn: OMG you write in a diary?
Bakura: JOURNAL
Prussia: there's no shame in having a diary. (he's got an effing library full of his diarys. Yeah he's old)
Bakura: Gaaaaa! Idiots!
Ginn: *death glare*
Bakura: Don't even deny it Baka!
Ginn: You're a Baka!
Bakura: You!
Ginn: You!
Ryujuki: break it up you're acting like children!
Ginn: I'm 13.
Ryujuki: true.
Kureno: Where do you even get a plain gray puzzle?
Kureo: Was Bakura just conviniantly carrying these props around in Ryous backpack? Wouldnt it be weird to just open your backpack and go 'oh look a knife'
Kureno: that happens to me all the time though.
Ryou: Can I have sugar?
Bakura: NO
Ginn: oh sure!
Bakura: No! Remember last time?
Ginn: At least it wasn't vodka!
Bakura: I wonder...
Ginn: Don't even think about it!
YamiBakura1988 6/22/12 . chapter 11
good chapter
GinnNekoChanAngel 6/20/12 . chapter 11
Ginn: Yes! Torture the female character!

Kureo: Why is it you hate anime girls so much?

Ginn: They interrupt ore-sama's yaoi...

Kureo: umm...

Order: Anyways, it's interesting the games that you come up with in this story, Bakura.

Bakura: It's a gift.

Chaos: Wanna play a game with ME?

Bakura: Sure.

Chaos: Okay, whoever touches Ginn's head and gets the least injuries wins okay? You first! *shove*

Bakura: Umm... *nerously touches Ginn*

Malik: *getting drooled over by Chaos*

Chaos: Someone get my whip!

Ginn: *goes into a rampage*

Bakura: CHAOS I WILL KILL YOU! *broken pretty much everything*

Chaos: My turn! *pets Ginn on the head*

Ginn: *punches Chaos in the face*

Tenshi: Why am I the only mature on? Anyways, I liked the part with Ryou in the begining. The whole chapter was pretty good. Hope the next chap comes out soon :)

Ginn: , { ] (this means I'm chasing a cupcake)
The Bride of constant Vigil 6/20/12 . chapter 11
Go Fluffy! Kill all the people! Ha Tristan...that I why you aren't the King of Games.
DemetriaNecrophades 6/20/12 . chapter 11
(is cheering for Bakura in the lines...until he glares at me)

YAY such a fun chapter! can May die please (does puppy eyes) lol. D
GinnNekoChanAngel 6/18/12 . chapter 10
Ginn: Ah...

Kureo: Yahoo! Serenity died sort of! (I hate Serenity)

Kureno: That's not nice.

Ginn: Well Marik who knows what's in store for you.

Chaos: It was an intereting chapter. Interesting title too.

Order: And why, Bakura, where you carrying a chain around?

Bakura: Umm... long story.

Order: I've got time.

Bakura: MAYBE I SECRETLY DREAM OF CHAINING UP MALIK OKAY?

Chaos: Sounds like someones in loooovvvveee...

Bakura: I AM NOT!

Chaos: Denial. Yup. He's definatly in love.

Order: Hm hm. *strokes invible beard*

Bakura: I'M SURROUNDED BY IDIOTS!

Kureno: I wouldn't say that around Ginn-sama...

Ginn: I WILL KICK YOUR ASS BAKURA!

Bakura: Meep! (Even Bakura would be scared of a girl holding a huge black sword in a threatening manner.)
DemetriaNecrophades 6/17/12 . chapter 10
(tackle hugs Bakura randomly while he's dragging Marik away) ISNT HE CUTE! (then runs)

Psh Bakura what a fine Basturd he is! D Giving the Orb to Yuugi like that. Oh well I still love him nice update D AND yay Serenity is down for the count I never liked her much lol.

I'll be awaiting the next chapter ;)
James Birdsong 6/17/12 . chapter 10
I liked these eight chapters :)
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