A really sad story. I'm hurting for Severus. I can't imagine what he had been through. How can someone stands to live after loosing so much. Alas thank you for this wonderful story

Hey, just wanted to let you know how I liked your story. Now normally I don't like Snape/Lily ffics, but yours is different. You had a good storyline, given that you didn't have any guidence from JKR, that was unexpecded and kept me on my toes. You also got a lot right just by guessing, so cootoes to you on that. This story deffinatly made it on my favorite list, so that is another point for you. You may have even changed my opinion on this ship.
Thanks for the story,
LEF

I simply adored this story. Then you still managed to make it cannon at the end. OMG. Poor Sev and Lily. They didn't get their marriage.

canon ending...oh gosh... ;_; sniffle

poor severus...poor harry...poor everyone! D:

but it was so well written! :D

i loved every agonizing moment! though i wish lily had informed myra about everything that happened with the love potion and severus. _

I'm sorry. I promised to stick with this and didn't. Forgive me? It's on my faves now so... I love how thus could work. This is my new lily background story.

oh my oh my! i love that last scene! XD

lily really does only need her eyes... :)

i like this so far, i shall read on!

I really enjoyed your story. I especially liked the spell gone wrong where 'the mantlepiece insisted it was the choir director' it made me laugh. The fact that Lily was consuming love potion all those years was so cruel - more to James than even Lily in my opinion! Couldn't Sirius see that he was hurting James more this way? The end was so very, very sad. I still thought it was well done though, and it fit perfectly with the story.

the amortentia twist was very clever and cruel simultaneously. great job!

I thought these next few chapters were very good as well. You updated very quickly! I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this story progresses.

Wow, this is a great story! I can see how the relationship between Lily and James would have developped the way it did. I can also see how the relationship between Lily and Severus ended, even though I thought it was very sad for both of them since they still cared for each other. I really liked the chapter where Lily and Myra were at Beauxbatons (yes I did just read the whole thing!), it had me laughing a lot. The way you write the characters is really well done

I really liked it until you had Lily cheat on Severus and basically cut Severus out of the story ...

Great start! I'm continuing to read this when you update. I tend to read the first chapter and then leave it for like 20 chapters and come back after its finished.