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| FFX2player 2007-04-01 ch 7, | abuseAWSOME! I like it, very nice. I don't mind Pupuran and Minako, it's cute. VERY funny ending, keep up the good work! |
| Lavender Youko 2004-03-23 ch 7, | abuseThis was a WICKED GOOD STORY! *claps* you are a very good author ^_^ None of the charectors (excpet maybe mamo-kun... xD) were out of charector, good job! That is the hardest thing for me when I'm trying to potray Peruru in my fics... our personalities are almost completely opposite ^^; Good to see Pupuran caring so much for his brother. [*waves to fairy* have fun with minako!] Well, glad to know someone else actaully knows who Peruru is... well, bye for now! ~Lavender Fairy/Youko |
| Gwennavierre 2003-04-01 ch 7, | abuseThat was so hilarious!! I love the pairings, and that last chappy was so funny! I started reading, and I couldn't stop! So I just read the whole thing. Best fanfic I EVER read! The characters act juust like themselves! Bravo, enchore!! |
| Yukikaima 2002-12-27 ch 7, | abuse>D!! I *LOVE* the Pupuran/Minako relationship. >D! I had always had trouble thinking up a match for her, but this works so sweetly. =D!! Beautiful fanficcie, Sugar puff! >D! I thought it was great, and it gave me something fluffy to read...which is all I want to read right now. I love the cuteness and whipped cream like fluff you have in this story. *sigh* I need more.... More sugar.... *goes off to find more fluff* ~Neko-chan |
| Yukikaima 2002-12-25 ch 5, | abuseAwwww.... All the frickin' romance is comforting tonight.... I feel so pathetic now.... _^_ Sweet scenes though, and the bit of romance between Veuns and Pupuran is adorable. Not only that, but you lend more respect to Sailor Moon when she acts more grown up...when she is more the queen she was meant to be instead of the whiny school girl she still is. I kinda like that. ^^; I think I can manage to read the manga and watch the Japanese version of the show now. ^^; If nothing else. This just comes off so cuddly. ~Neko-chan |
| Yukikaima 2002-12-24 ch 4, | abuseI don't want to be alone anymore.... Geez.... The last two chapters were really good for mush. ^^v!! I love the way Chibi Usa comes out in your fic. *sigh* I wish I could have seen the movie subbed now. ^^; |
| Yukikaima 2002-12-19 ch 2, | abuseOranjiya and Bananu are JERKS!! >O!!! Poor Chibi Usa...being attacked by Peruru like that...;_; Well, good chapter over all, and I still love how you portray Chibi Usa. ^^v!! I also take it you prefer the out Senshi over certain other members. _^_ It's quite obvious. >D!! But hey...I feel the same. ^.~ Then again, this is an older work of yours, who's to say your opinion might not have changed a bit in time. ^^; ~Neko-chan |
| Yukikaima 2002-12-04 ch 1, | abuseUgh...trying to catch up on lost time here. ^^; Wish me luck. Since I have a couple of days without work..._^_...I'm *FINALLY* getting to read this. Sadly, I doubt I'll get very far though.... Anyway, gorgeous idea. But I think I said that before. ^^; And I actually like the coupling, I think it's cute. (I vaguely remember the movie...O.o I think I need to buy some BSSM movies. >D!! Other than just S. >D!!) But it is a cute idea, although the pining thing *CAN* get annoying. Not here though. It comes off as really sweet. And it is sad that they both lose everything close to them that they love. Something in common, me thinks. ^.~ So far, neat humour...typical Usagi...and the characterizations are pretty good...especially considering I normally dislike ChibiUsa, but you manage her character so that I find her adorable instead. ^^; Beautiful job. ~Neko-chan |
| Lyonette 2002-10-21 ch 7, | abuseNow I get to read your fic ^-^ I never watched Outlaw Star, but I know Sailor Moon so I read this. Um...wow... you can't possibly be serious about being a rookie 0_0 because.. even though I never was into the series, each chapter pushed me ahead. It has great tempo and concrete, balanced flow (something I love in all fanfics or manga:) and it was sweet and exciting setting. I love the way you described atmospherics...I really like that in writing, I wish I could write like that. It was easy getting into Chibiusa's pov,feeling for her taisetsuna hito. neat job ;) It's amazing how I can read SM fic and actually have fun getting into it. p.s. I like Haruka-sama ^^ never really watched older eps. but I was fascinated with the outer scouts. Haruka/Michiru are something. ;) p.p.s. I heard Sailor Neptune hates cockroach. (i have roach phobia and I wonder why she hates them) *Mimi is now off-topic ^o^;* |
| Comechatcha 2002-09-28 ch 7, | abuseYou know, it's a good thing Peruru has wings and Mamoru doesn't. Great fic by the way. |
| Kenshin Himura 2002-08-08 ch 7, | abuseYou're great for a so-called rookie! Are you sure that you aren't an experienced writer? You have quite a talent there, unlike me, 'one who has weird ideas & can't paste the words together decently.' I love Peruru & no one makes fics about him. And this fanfic, as you said it would, gave me WAFF (Warm And Fuzzy Feelings). I'm putting this on my favorite stories thingie. *~Keep Writing~* ~_^ |
| Final Elysian 2002-08-07 ch 7, | abuseThis fic was SOOO CUTE!!! *squeal* You should write some more Peruru+Chibi Usa fics! It's definately one of the more cuter couples in BSSM, and they need some recognition! Forget Helios, yanno? GREAT job. |
| Lithryhm 2002-07-23 ch 6, | abuse*shakes you*8 you.must.write.more!O_O |
| Kitahoshi 2002-06-07 ch 3, | abuse*sniffle* that was so sad...are you gonna continue this?I wanna know what happens , if you're not going to , e-mail me what happens at least! |
| Kitahoshi 2002-06-07 ch 2, | abuseno!not Peruru! *_* |