The final lines really left an impact. wow. just. just wow.

Really liked the way you wrote Alaska's memories, added another flawless aspect to your writing! xo

omg.

I really like how you spliced in both the best and worst memories Alaska has of her mother. It just goes to show how her head was everywhere that night.

The writing style itself sets the scene very viscerally too, like the line "the smell of coconut lingering in the hot black air." It sounds pretty and just paints a vivid picture.