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yiaofangirl 5/15/13 . chapter 11 Please continue this! |
Shidou 4/30/13 . chapter 11sob sob sobss just why wouldn't sashi open up to yuuu *faint* it kinda feels awkward now cause i just finish reading this pairing in uke flu with Yuu starting to spill his story...this is almost like the timeline is messed up and i'm reading back to the start of their romantic journey XD update update please! X3 |
inuyasha.lover33 3/13/13 . chapter 11I wanna know what happen! please update when you have time. So much drama haha I love this, I finished reading this in a day! Its really interesting! Please update, thanks |
JoanIncarnate 2/24/13 . chapter 11awwww, noooo, yuu and hisashi and atsushi and just- ahhh, noooo! |
Inujuju712 2/22/13 . chapter 11Poor Yuu... Please update! |
Daniel Lazerus 2/13/13 . chapter 10Another chapter filling in the pieces of Hisashi's troubled past. I have great empathy for him and know too well the feeling of freezing and the "blank face." He was so fortunate to have Atsushi and a safe place. Like Yuu, I smiled to imagine Hisashi ensconced there. The bit of Renaka's history was welcome as well and explains why she's so wonderfully different. Again, both Atsushi and Hisashi were lucky to have her. I am also delighted with knowing "Steve's" origins. And the humorous ending with Renaka's assistants... that woman has her hands full and then some. Slowly catching up Flamingo! Kisses! |
Cerberus Revised 2/12/13 . chapter 6Here I am again. I think I shall work backwards through my inbox until I am all caught up, though with how productive you are, even in a slightly slower pace, I don't know that I'll ever get caught back up. So far behind... *shakes head in dismay* Again, I am enjoying going back and re-living these past chapters. I don't often re-read things so this is a treat. I love how, even though he is gone you still give Atsushi presence in your Artistica fics. He is a true character, even in his absence, and a significant one. Your allowing us into his room, while humorous is also very bittersweet. He is such an original, an eccentric, a fanboy... It's no wonder that he meant so much to Hisashi. And it makes me feel sad that even in this fictional world he's gone as the world needs far more people like Atsushi in it. Hisashi and Yuu sharing this moment carries just as much if not more power than that of the shrine. It is touching that Hisashi is allowing Yuu into his world in this way. Likewise that Yuu is allowing Hisashi to share with him and takes it in without the "seme jealousy" that characterizes so many yaoi stories. It speaks of the quality of their partnership. There's also a lot here that rounds out Hisashi and explains him more fully... his own room at his foster mother's home... being home schooled... attending college online. These offer explanations for his shyness and his being so adorably socially awkward. I also like his admission that he is not a dedicated student. It is a nice break from the driven Japanese stereotype. The tender quiet at the end was a great way to finish this chapter. the note about the necklace brings the story nicely back to the earlier events of "Always" while keeping it here in "Forever" too. I like the history you're building here. Okay, now I have to go get ready for work... Meh. At least I have my catch up to look forward too! |
rubyrinoa 1/31/13 . chapter 9Freaking love the assistants! |
rubyrinoa 1/31/13 . chapter 6I just love your OC's they fit in so seamlessly. |
HappySunshine29 12/5/12 . chapter 10Best cure for exam stress EVER! |
SakuraFlowersFalling 12/5/12 . chapter 10OMG. This story is just SO COOL! |
Inujuju712 12/4/12 . chapter 10:3 nice... i liked this chapter... i laughed so hard at rainbow men... lol lmfao update asap! |
Shidou 10/9/12 . chapter 9Gahhh! OMG PLEASE! update SOONNNNN! Love Artistica3 The three girls really ARE weird! oh well, w/e, as long as Hisashi and Yuu is here it's fine XD |
Shidou 10/9/12 . chapter 8Hey TBF101! I'm finally using my username to comment! I have been either too lazy or forgot to login and thus have been commenting as a guest...(well...also the fact that I just opened the account recently...like only few months ago) Waa...somehow I missed your ch.8 update...and just see it now with the ch.9 coming out...So i'll just read on for now :) |
JoanIncarnate 10/8/12 . chapter 9hur hur hur. lovin them crazies. |