I'm confused... Isn't Percy an only child. People keep making him have a bro or sis. Does he have on or not? Oh, and good story.

I like it a lot. Update soon. The story idea is cool.

Oh oh oh awesome..

i can tell this is based off the movie, im disappointed

it seems good! )_))

*sigh* Only Leo.

You have YET to tell them anything of value about Percy

Yeah, I guess that's a good idea, but she shouldn't be a daughter of Poseidon... Sorry, but that's really overdone, cliched, and waay too Mary-Sueish..

This was a good chapter; it was funny the way Rachel would just randomly think of something.

Good job! :)

I like the story but Grover made the story sound like he was the hero and you got this from the movie the second story. Overall I like it but use the book more plz cause ur an amazing writer...

awesome story

Don't worry, I won't flame. I wonder who the mystery person is... I cannot wait until you write the next chapter. Ooh talk about suspense! Cliff hanger! :)

Thanks for not taking my last review as a flame, and if I did anything to upset you, I'm sorry. Really, I am. It's a great story, it was just the movie stuff that irked me. So I'm glad you'll fix it :)

Again, sorry if I did/said anything to upset you!

*J.C*

P.S- this is pjoroxs, btw. I didn't have time to tell u who I was.

O.O woah...did not expect that...

Update soon!

Wait isn't that how it happened in the movie not the book? Nice story!

God no. Please don't tell this story through the view of the movie because it had next to nothing in common with the book