| Reviews for Fatal Touch |
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Guest 10/19/12 . chapter 5 Was just the ending changed? I liked it. And I'm really hoping we see Larten soon again I miss him. Thank you for updating! love, Zypherblaze |
zypherblaze 9/4/12 . chapter 5That was great! Thank you very much for updating. Hope you continue soon! |
zypherblaze 9/3/12 . chapter 2I REALLY like this and I hope you continue it. Only thing is that the paragraphs are too close together making it more difficult to read, every time someone speaks he/she should have their own paragraph. But other than that I love it! Please update soon! love, Zypherblaze |