|Reviews for Julia of the Labyrinth|
| Guest 8/2/12 . chapter 1
hey, the beginning sounds quite good. when will you continue?
hm I just thought that Julia sounds more like a modern name and Joanna more like the name you'd give a princess... reminded me of 'moana'
so, if she is the queen, what about Moana/Ophilia? doesn't she exist or was Joanna/Julia maybe Ophilia in a past life, when the faun wasn't able to get her to the kingdom?
I also think you could go more into detail about descriptions of emotions, I mean why isn't she confused or anything? seems like she is a normal teen (did I miss her age, or how old is she?) she is not a child like Ophelia in the film... what I want to say is that she is not the type of girl 'awww a fairy, I knew they were real!' she is seeing the fairy: 'ah, okay a fairy. Let's follow her.' this is where I miss more thoughts and emotions ...
but I'd like to read more soon :)))))