really good short one

IT COULD MAKE A GREAT STORY W/ MANY CH.

Beautiful, just beautiful.
/WintherRose

THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN ALL MY LIFE!

-Kaline Reine

Wow that is beyond words. great!

Love it!

Wow! As great as "the debt", "Vendetta", "One" and "Unexpected consequences" (even if that last one is unfinished) even If It's short. A stormy night inspired you? Well, I must say that I should look around for inspiration too. Ironic isn't it? :) Their story began during a stormy night and they weren't on good terms then, and you write a fanfic in which they get together and forget about the past during a stormy night. That was a great idea. Congratulation again. You're the best. I tell the people of every single forum I'm a member of to read you FF, but do they listen to me? They don't know what they're missing. :)

Enchanting. Everything was described beauitfully, and in such detail that it was almost like a movie. I could see all of it playing out, that is the mark of a great writer. Kudos!

Wow, I know that isn't saying much, but...Wow again. You sure can write.

This is a really great story. I love how this turned out.

So sweet and comforting. I love your work.

Cool, Cool I love it.
Hey I think I reviewed in the 'One' but I'm not sure. I really love this one and 'One' It really helped me on my writing and inspired me to start writing again. Plus it made me want to re-watch Labyrinth again. I watched it when I was younger and loved it, but I never knew what it was until I seen it on Hallmark late one night.
I never really get into stories, but I read your story in two days and it took me a week to finish the fifth Harry Potter book and that only had 35 chaps.
So once again I would like to thik you for that and hope to read more from you.
See Ya ^_^
Jean McNeice

are you going to write more of this? or is it a one off. please email to tell me if_6@hotmail.com

thanks!

As always, a fantastic story. there was no need for dialouge, you described the emotions beautifully.

OMG I was practicaly in tears after reading this Fic, it was so good!! It is ok that you are not gonna write another chpt cause it kinda explains it and that would lessen the first chapter. keep writing!