|Reviews for Revenge|
| Ohsoclever1 11/10/12 . chapter 13
Wow girl, You got tears in my throat that are threatening to fall from my eyes from that read. The sex scene was so intense, sensual, and emotional.
So Peyton knew the whole time? how could she just work with Spencer for four years and never let on? Crazy, I would be bit upset with her if I was Spence.
Oh scars, I see what you did there...not just Spencer scar, but the scars from the past.
I'm glad Spencer is going to tell Ashley because honestly if it was me I couldn't keep a secret , especially one so big from the woman I love.
Breathtaking read, thank you
| Mukyti 11/10/12 . chapter 1
Love the way you ended the story!
| mb168 11/10/12 . chapter 21
| Ohsoclever1 11/10/12 . chapter 12
Wait one minute, so Martha/Anne/ Ashley's Grandmother can tell Brooke everything, but not Spencer? wtf!
The way you described Ashley's turmoil in the room was incredible.
I love the flash back of thought and feelings right before Spencer said she loved Ashley, you really painted that picture beautifully.
"left little to the imagination, but that didn't stop me I had plenty of imagination, running through my head" I love it!
Awe, A walk on the beach, sweet ending to an emotional read, thank you :)
| Ohsoclever1 11/10/12 . chapter 11
Wow, Martha/Anne/Ashley's Grandmother...really, how do you come up with these things?
Traumatic Amnesia, Repressed Memory, does that exist? I'm going to have to look that up. I'm just blown away that Ashley ended up in the mental hospital after the car accident and she indeed hit Spencer, I really believe she didn't at first. Besides the accident how amazing is Ashley for spending time with Spencer mom since Spencer couldn't, getting Spence Uncle sent away, transferring her mother to a specialize.
I already know it's going to be a hell of a ride when Spencer and Ashley finally have that little talk of "oh you hit me with your car and I been plotting revenge on you ever since, but I'm over it now because I am falling for you" like Whoa!
Amazing read, thank you
| Ohsoclever1 11/10/12 . chapter 10
Wow, That was a journey and I really enjoyed the ride. You might take a while to update, but the chapters be so long and full, this chapter could of been 3 chapters.
Freaking Carmen, I am sure this is not the last of her bitter self. "smack that smirk off her smirking face" clever girl :).
I need to know if Ashley remember Spencer, and if so she shouldn't get mad at anything Spencer does. I'm also going to need Ashley to stop running away every time things get shaky.
I have to know what really went down that night.
And Seriously Anne/Martha? Not contacting Spencer and hiding in the shadows like she's her gardening angle who's trying to get her wings.
Wonderful read, thank you
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 9
Seriously, where can I get a friend that will hiring me for a job and would try to hook me up with a bombshell like Ashley? Is there a store somewhere to find one of these kind friends?
First of all McDonald's? Ewww, I use to work there...enough said!
Poor Aiden, I wonder does this mean he's going get with Peyton.
Awe, I want a girl to be two steps from my door with wine and cookies :).
I laugh so hard I couldn't breath for a minute when Ash got hit with the can, seriously how do you come up with these things? It be at the perfect time and so unexpected, good stuff :)
Spencer talking to her self out loud when it's suppose to be in her head and hitting her head on the door, I love how perfectly awkward they are together.
Freaking Aiden ruining the moment and why the hell is Brooke looking piss?
Great read, thank you :)
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 8
I had a feeling Carmen was the leak, but I still can't figure out why she's so salty (hmmm, was she there the night of the accident?). I never would of guess she was dating Penelope. This is getting juicy.
Ashley got some splainin to do (Ricky Ricardo voice).
Great read, Thank you
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 7
The fall up the stare had me laughing so hard, Wow! you are clever because I never saw that coming. hmmmm, What is going on in that pretty little head of Ashley's? I hope Ashley does have a good reason.
I like how Spencer in Ashley's relationship is developing in this story slow and steady.
OAN: I can't wait to see who this Anne is, maybe I am just so gay but I'm thinking it's her mother lover.
Wonderful read, thank you
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 6
Fist of all you are a beast at describing that drunk scene , lol it was perfection really.
Oh wow! so all three of them were in the Car the night Spencer got it, well at least Peyton was, so they should remember Spencer.
This Story is like a soap opera as soon as you think you got it figured out... Bam! try again.
Lovely read as always, thank you
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 5
I knew Brooke Was not Ashley GF, I just knew it! Spencer is way over her head and needs to get it together. I wonder what this Carmen girl is up too. this story is getting more and more cryptic and I was not expecting that, but I love it!
The sex scene was beautifully written, it was sexy and sensual without being too raw. I was upset at Brooke for falling a sleep than leaving with a a goodbye or a note, damn!
Lovely read, thank you :)
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 3
I believe Ashley is cheating. Did you see 13 going on 30? someone linking information from one Magazine to they're competitor reminded me of that movie. I really don't think Ashley's the link. I feel Spencer got her all wrong.
I do have one concern, Spencer has the weekends off and she said this after her moment that didn't happen with Brooke; however, when she seen Ashley in her office she wonder did she know what happen yesterday with Brooke, but that doesn't add up time wise because it would of been at least two days that had pass since she last seen Brooke. You get what I mean? please let me know.
Thanks for the lovely read
| Ohsoclever1 11/9/12 . chapter 4
I like that line "The two Ashleys I saw when I looked at her were battling with me like an angel and a devil on my shoulders"...that was deep!
"I do actually have a beating heart inside of me. It's just that it's been broken so many times that it no longer beats the way others do". Pure poetry...two snaps
I'm sorry I don't care how sexy Brooke is, I would of have questioned how the hell she got inside my apt... that's not cool at all!.
Awesome chapter! I could visualize everything while I read it.
| irishinkjunkie1024 11/9/12 . chapter 21
Wow...I never thought Ashley would run away again especially after her and Spencer expressed their feelings but I can kinda understand the wanting time alone to think. Hopefully she won't run for to long and ruin things w Spencer. Can't wait for ur nxt update. Hopefully its soon!
| Chillaxin1 11/9/12 . chapter 21
Theres one thing I most def love about ur stories, specially when u get in2 the emotional segments, and that is the way u word things the actions u make the characters do. Its like u can feel it as a reader. U could visualize it see the emotion feel what they feelin see their reactions and sometimes i feel like that can really be hard 2 accomplish pero u def pull it off every time. Love the update :)