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| Reviews for A new pokmon stor |
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   bluucookiez 4/29/13 . chapter 1PLEEEEEEEEEASE work on your spelling and punctuation! |
| Misaki Sayuri 10/13/12 . chapter 1 Um...it's very short. |
| critic 9/28/12 . chapter 1 Horrible spelling... |
| simon.derks1 7/30/12 . chapter 1 I didn't want to read this when I saw the first sentence. What a horrible spelling... |
| Cameron 7/11/12 . chapter 1 You're Spelling can definatly improve but it looks good |
