OH GOD. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!

Still great! And yeah, this love thing is really messed up. FirexSand, CinderxFire, LittlexCinder... now we just need SandxLittle to complete the circle! Jk, XD

Anyway, I hope you update soon! :D

Whoa! I always imagined Littlecloud as a responsible, level-headed, kind, soft-spoken sort of cat. Your story seems to hold true to this idea, although his rage at Firestar, causing him to faint, seems a bit OOC to me.

Good! Everything is realistically written, like not exactly the Erins' voice but the sort of things they would decide to happen, things that would logically happen after the BloodClan battle. You know what I mean. I also love the attention to detail.

And I always thought Little had a bit of a crush on Cinder. Although, I always imagined it as a thing where he had a crush on her, but he tried to set it aside and tried not to let his feelings grow, and it never really got past a one-sided crush on account of his being a very professional and committed medicine cat. Though I think he harbored those feelings throughout his life.

Still, seeing another's perspective on LittlexCinder (especially as it's a very overlooked pairing) is refreshing.

Yay! I love CinderxLittle.

I wait the next chapter!