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there you go, dark link :)

this is really good. don't you stop writing, b/c you are so good at writing dark stories.

I really like this story, I hope you'll write more! Oh and I hope there will be a little bit of Dark Link and Zelda love. I think they're a great couple! PEACE OUT^-^!

That was a good chapter, I look forward to reading chapter 5.

This is a great way to reveal the inner thoughts of each of the sages, but will you ever leave the dream world and start a plot? Or is this just the collection of random character's thoughts. Either way, I find no real flaws in your writing skills, I'm just wondering where this all is leading to.

Impa's one of my favorite Zelda characters, and always has been. I thik you have her personality down perfectly, Neechan - dark and pained but content. Perfect. This one, I think, is almost as haunting as Shadow Link's chapter, although in a different way...lovely and terrible, Neechan. Keep it up!

Wow. Just...wow. I love this. Admittedly, Darunia is NOT my favorite character, but I really see him through a different light now...very cool. Sad, but wondeerful nonetheless.

This is a really good Story!

I"m impressed! write some more plz!

Maybe you should check out some of my stories.

really good work!

Very nice. Will there be more?

Darkmaster

Wow! That was great! So sad and miserable...it honestly was brilliant and interesting. It really has me up to the screen. Please keep writing!

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hey its me * waves* this is cool i like it

For some odd, twisted reason I really like this. I have defintely had some days where i felt like this.

Who knew you were so good at violence, Oneechan?